Ohmy. What an amazing way to break my heart. But with the end you allow it to mend itself again as it can just tell itself everything will work out fine for the two in the end.
I love you. And I have lost the ability to give good reviews. But I just never know where to start exactly because every little thing with you is always so perfect and I cannot quote the whole thing now, can I?
I am glad you didn't put in (or weren't able to write it ;)) the steamy sex scene in the end. In my humble opinion it wouldn't have really fitted if it would have been described in more detail. This way it works much better, I'd say.
Okay, I'll try. I'll just probably sound like a broken record after each quote ;)
Adam is always in the middle, always a part, always noticed. Are you lonely? Do you miss me? Do you wonder where I am? Carl places a hand against the cool glass, palm occluding his friend from the scene. Are you lonely, Adam? That one, of course.
Adam is in the middle of a crowd, and desertion threathens to overcome him. Beautiful line.
It is all he has left of Carl. :( Conversation could help those boys, no?
How can a bed actually be too small for those two? Probably all those extra singing muscles everywhere, eh?
Ask me to stay. Why don’t you ask me to stay? Because he is scared you won't, you idiot.
Good old Stan! ♥
He thinks he’s given up feeling anything by now. “Stay.” He’s wrong.
*sigh* Lovely. Just lovely.
I hope that helped a bit. There could have quoted so much more but I fear I really would have only repeated myself again and again.
Thank you &hearts And sorry for attention whoring. I'm feeling better now, but this evening was a bit offish.
That one, of course. I was a bit scared of writing like that at first. Thoughts are always difficult.
I hope this makes sense in a way? Because I felt that it's easy to spiral into something like this - if you don't say anything it only gets harder and harder to say it the next times, but I dunno. They're just so silly *hugs them*
Beautiful line. *bows* Poor Adam.
I actually had a bunny where Carl does leave and they only meet again after a year, and then the shit really hits the fan (with a happy ending, though).
Conversation could help those boys, no? Go away with your Earth Logic.
How can a bed actually be too small for those two? Probably all those extra singing muscles everywhere, eh? *lol* Who knows what they were doing?
Because he is scared you won't, you idiot.They're both just so thick-headed
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I love you. And I have lost the ability to give good reviews. But I just never know where to start exactly because every little thing with you is always so perfect and I cannot quote the whole thing now, can I?
I am glad you didn't put in (or weren't able to write it ;)) the steamy sex scene in the end. In my humble opinion it wouldn't have really fitted if it would have been described in more detail. This way it works much better, I'd say.
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See, right now I could really use a bit of quotation love *is bundle of nerves*
Yeah, I guess so. They just didn't want me to know what was happening.
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Adam is always in the middle, always a part, always noticed.
Are you lonely?
Do you miss me?
Do you wonder where I am?
Carl places a hand against the cool glass, palm occluding his friend from the scene.
Are you lonely, Adam?
That one, of course.
Adam is in the middle of a crowd, and desertion threathens to overcome him.
Beautiful line.
It is all he has left of Carl.
:( Conversation could help those boys, no?
How can a bed actually be too small for those two? Probably all those extra singing muscles everywhere, eh?
Ask me to stay.
Why don’t you ask me to stay?
Because he is scared you won't, you idiot.
Good old Stan! ♥
He thinks he’s given up feeling anything by now.
“Stay.”
He’s wrong.
*sigh* Lovely. Just lovely.
I hope that helped a bit. There could have quoted so much more but I fear I really would have only repeated myself again and again.
*hugs*
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That one, of course.
I was a bit scared of writing like that at first. Thoughts are always difficult.
I hope this makes sense in a way? Because I felt that it's easy to spiral into something like this - if you don't say anything it only gets harder and harder to say it the next times, but I dunno. They're just so silly *hugs them*
Beautiful line.
*bows* Poor Adam.
I actually had a bunny where Carl does leave and they only meet again after a year, and then the shit really hits the fan (with a happy ending, though).
Conversation could help those boys, no?
Go away with your Earth Logic.
How can a bed actually be too small for those two? Probably all those extra singing muscles everywhere, eh?
*lol* Who knows what they were doing?
Because he is scared you won't, you idiot.They're both just so thick-headed ( ... )
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