Ah, this is better. Now I only see your comment and not the end of the story as well. *lol*
The printer is going a bit bonkers from the porn, I think. It is printing the pages in a total weird order. Interesting. Is why I by mistake read the end. *lol* Cause I was wondering why the thing stopped printing the first page in the middle *rolleyes*
I am telling you ALL printers in this house are either playing dead or insane! Some things never change.
Okay, I read it straight away in the end. I am just weak, the thought of it lying next to my bed made me way too nervous ;) I just knew it *lol*
And it was so worth the wait because it is so much better with this partner on the receiving end. WAY BETTER! Isn't it? Poor Johnny, though *pets* And yeah, there you have it. Actually, the first blow job I've ever written, I think *ponders*
And now you've got me worried. Aww *HUGS*
Don't you dare stopping, I'm addicted to your fluff. Plus, we're writing in different universes ;) My next bunny is another first time fic, so I'm not following a timeline or something anyway.
I know you deserve much, much better feedback (especially as you always give out such lovely feedback) but I am afraid I am not able to deliver because I would quote the whole thing in the end, and would probably repeat myself a thousand times with my declarations. It's such a beauty! Trust me, this serves as fantastic feedback! I'm very proud you feel like that :)
But I *did* read it in bed. The real bad part is that I extra switched the PC back on to comment. *lol*
Johnny will get over it. He would never stand in the path of true love. And if you haven't hidden any blow jobs from me than this is the very first you have ever written.
Don't worry, I am fine. It's just slightly embarrassing and as said quite personal and about much more than just the fic. The fic just triggered it.
I won't stop, don't worry. I still just wish I had your writing skills.
Trust me, this serves as fantastic feedback! I'm very proud you feel like that :) Good :D *HUGGLES*
I love it SO MUCH. First of all, you're a great writer. ;) I love that they're DRUNK. Drunk rockstars always appeal to me to no end. And I just ADORE how detailed the whole thing is. The thing that bugs me the most about slashes, and fics in general, is that the sex itself is never detailed enough. They make the whole story and everything and then they describe the whole sex part in like 2 short (VERY SHORT!) paragraphs, with no details whatsoever. That fucking sucks! What are you writing a slash for if you're not gonna explain the whole thing?! DUH! So of course, I LOVE your story because it's REALLY so detailed. And the whole thing is actually so passionate and I'll dare to say, romantic. I don't find it dirty at all. Well, maybe dirty, but in a GOOD way. ;)
Great job writing this. AMAZING. I enjoyed it SO MUCH. *whimpers* I think I learned a lot about blowjobs too. ;D *lol*
Uh wow *HUGS* Thank you so much for this, it really means a lot to me *snuggles up*
First of all, you're a great writer. ;) See me grinning and bouncing in my chair now. Looks very silly. *blows kiss*
I love that they're DRUNK. Drunk rockstars always appeal to me to no end. I know *LOL* And with C/A it's just easy to write them like that, doc and all. It's this sweet/playful/dorky/slurring/unrestrained/sweaty/sexy thing.
Totally with on the lack of detail in slash. I hate it when they handle it like that. I love fluff, but where's the sense in smut that isn't smutty? Meh. And trust, writing the details was FUN *eg* (Although I had to stop frequently. Uhm.)
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I hope i didn't do to many typing mistakes as it is hard typing with closed eyes.
*smoooch* Love you.
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Love you, too. Sleep well.
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The printer is going a bit bonkers from the porn, I think. It is printing the pages in a total weird order. Interesting. Is why I by mistake read the end. *lol* Cause I was wondering why the thing stopped printing the first page in the middle *rolleyes*
I am telling you ALL printers in this house are either playing dead or insane! Some things never change.
Nernight!
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*snorts* Poor printer. Must be all the alcohol in this story ;)
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I just knew it *lol*
And it was so worth the wait because it is so much better with this partner on the receiving end. WAY BETTER!
Isn't it? Poor Johnny, though *pets* And yeah, there you have it. Actually, the first blow job I've ever written, I think *ponders*
And now you've got me worried. Aww *HUGS*
Don't you dare stopping, I'm addicted to your fluff. Plus, we're writing in different universes ;) My next bunny is another first time fic, so I'm not following a timeline or something anyway.
I know you deserve much, much better feedback (especially as you always give out such lovely feedback) but I am afraid I am not able to deliver because I would quote the whole thing in the end, and would probably repeat myself a thousand times with my declarations. It's such a beauty!
Trust me, this serves as fantastic feedback! I'm very proud you feel like that :)
*LMAO* 's okay ;)
Thank you so much :)
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Johnny will get over it. He would never stand in the path of true love. And if you haven't hidden any blow jobs from me than this is the very first you have ever written.
Don't worry, I am fine. It's just slightly embarrassing and as said quite personal and about much more than just the fic. The fic just triggered it.
I won't stop, don't worry. I still just wish I had your writing skills.
Trust me, this serves as fantastic feedback! I'm very proud you feel like that :)
Good :D *HUGGLES*
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*LMAO* *pets*
I'd never hide any blow jobs from you *angel face*
Well, Johnny's got Nessa, that's as good as it gets :)
Fine then *hugs* I guess.
Eh *blushes*
*SQUEE*
Meep. I hope this comes across as amusing in places (like the beer fight), because I so want it to be...
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*looks forward to it*
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I love it SO MUCH. First of all, you're a great writer. ;)
I love that they're DRUNK. Drunk rockstars always appeal to me to no end. And I just ADORE how detailed the whole thing is. The thing that bugs me the most about slashes, and fics in general, is that the sex itself is never detailed enough. They make the whole story and everything and then they describe the whole sex part in like 2 short (VERY SHORT!) paragraphs, with no details whatsoever. That fucking sucks! What are you writing a slash for if you're not gonna explain the whole thing?! DUH! So of course, I LOVE your story because it's REALLY so detailed. And the whole thing is actually so passionate and I'll dare to say, romantic. I don't find it dirty at all. Well, maybe dirty, but in a GOOD way. ;)
Great job writing this. AMAZING. I enjoyed it SO MUCH. *whimpers* I think I learned a lot about blowjobs too. ;D *lol*
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First of all, you're a great writer. ;)
See me grinning and bouncing in my chair now. Looks very silly. *blows kiss*
I love that they're DRUNK. Drunk rockstars always appeal to me to no end.
I know *LOL* And with C/A it's just easy to write them like that, doc and all. It's this sweet/playful/dorky/slurring/unrestrained/sweaty/sexy thing.
Totally with on the lack of detail in slash. I hate it when they handle it like that. I love fluff, but where's the sense in smut that isn't smutty? Meh. And trust, writing the details was FUN *eg* (Although I had to stop frequently. Uhm.)
Thank you so much again *smooches*
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~Neffie
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