It was hard to tell under his dark skin tone, but it looked as if his cheeks were pink.
Do I smell a love interest? *sets up shipper's tent*
I keep meaning to comment on your excerpts, but I never seem to get around to it (which is totally unfair, and I'm sorry!) but I've been keeping up, and I really like what I've seen. I admit, I haven't quite caught the entirety of the plot, but then, I'm only seeing a few short excerpts. I really like Jaedyn, and the glimpses I've seen of the world you're creating is really fascinating.
Yes, it's a love interest, but not in the way you think. At least, I hope it's not, because if it is, it'll screw up my whole plot. Damned characters and their damned free will. Who the hell thought that up, anyway? XP /love triangles are messy
Anyway, thank you! It's okay that you haven't been commenting. Busy peeps are busy. And as for the plot, don't worry, there isn't much of one right now. This book is mostly world-building and setting up Jaedyn and Shahalla's backstory-- the really important stuff happens in the next two books-- so it's just basically meandering about right now.
I'm glad you like Jaedyn, because I'm finding her to be a pain in the ass (and a boring one to boot) at the moment. Shahalla is stealing the story.
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Do I smell a love interest? *sets up shipper's tent*
I keep meaning to comment on your excerpts, but I never seem to get around to it (which is totally unfair, and I'm sorry!) but I've been keeping up, and I really like what I've seen. I admit, I haven't quite caught the entirety of the plot, but then, I'm only seeing a few short excerpts. I really like Jaedyn, and the glimpses I've seen of the world you're creating is really fascinating.
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Anyway, thank you! It's okay that you haven't been commenting. Busy peeps are busy. And as for the plot, don't worry, there isn't much of one right now. This book is mostly world-building and setting up Jaedyn and Shahalla's backstory-- the really important stuff happens in the next two books-- so it's just basically meandering about right now.
I'm glad you like Jaedyn, because I'm finding her to be a pain in the ass (and a boring one to boot) at the moment. Shahalla is stealing the story.
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*feels marginally better*
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