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[mary_v]

Charlie Swan

Charlie as a child, as a teen as an adult. Charlie as a son, a husband, a father.

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It was a game between himself and his father. His dad would set the stage, asking him what he wanted, asking him so what is it you want to do, champ? Never what he wanted to play, always what he wanted to do. Charlie answered as always, I wanna

Comments

Yay!

[ncdsbookworm]

Awh! love love love :) This is so good.

However--- i think something is up with the formatting at the beginning on the title line. :)

Congrats again!

Re: Yay!

[mary_v]

LOL Woops!! Thanks!
But what better compliment than naming a fic after you? lol!

[scarlett71177]

Aw! This was so sweet- and that last line... *guh*

Lovely piece. Great pov from Charlie.

[mary_v]

:D:D Thanks so much! You're my Twilight gal, so your opinion is most important!

And your gift!fic will be coming soon, just that things got kind of crazy!

Thanks again! <3

[scarlett71177]

*hugs* No worries.

It was a great ficlet, I just love how you chose to explore Charlie's thoughts.

[mary_v]

Thanks! It's just that I'm sick of people writing about Charlie in fics without having bothered actually trying to figure him out as a character. I mean secondary characters are immensely important, and I've always loved Charlie. :P

[maaike_fluffy]

GREAT fic! This actually the very fist Twilight fic I read, and you didn't let me down. How original to choose Charlie's POV for a change, instead of Bella, Edward or Jacob. I've always wondered how Charlie and Renee would react to Bella marrying right out of school. I figured he would try to stop it, but this actually makes more sense. He just wanted to be sure their love was the real deal. He's not exactly in the position to disapprove now, is he?

[mary_v]

Oh thank you so much! I'm very flattered that this was your first twilight fic, even more so that you liked it!:D
And I understand what you mean about the POV and the reaction. I just don't see Charlie flipping out!

Thanks again!
~Maria