12 Days, Day 11: Barely a Holiday (2/3)

Jul 30, 2010 03:02

Title: Barely a Holiday - A Fanmix & Fic!
Pairings/Characters: Mary/Marshall, Stan, Eleanor, Brandi, Peter, OC
Rating: PG13
Spoilers: General episode mentions, but nothing major.

Barely a Holiday --> On to Part 2 )

hiatus fun: 12 days, zzauthor: siapom, fanfiction

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bujyo July 30 2010, 13:07:39 UTC
So many good things in this chapter...so many!!

Mary's introspection in the beginning was perfect, and Marshall being her "go to" man... *sigh*

The shooting anniversaries...wow. Those would be really rough.

GREAT job...can't wait for part 3!

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siapom July 31 2010, 22:48:12 UTC
I'm happy you liked them! I'd love to see one of the anniversaries addressed on the show.

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lunar_penguin July 30 2010, 13:25:42 UTC
Loved every word!

On to part 3! *charges*

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siapom July 31 2010, 22:52:06 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :)

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kittyknighton July 30 2010, 16:15:33 UTC
Loved these - my favorites were the shooting anniversaries. So lovely! =)

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siapom July 31 2010, 22:56:45 UTC
Thank you! :)

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caiasm July 30 2010, 17:20:50 UTC
Hi... read the first part too, sorry I didn't comment there.
I'm liking this a lot, and now I'm off to read the 3rd part.

Durga is very appropriate for Mary.

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siapom July 31 2010, 22:59:40 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed these. Thanks for reading! :)

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randomrattle July 30 2010, 22:49:11 UTC
OoooOOOOooooo, songs for the anniversary of their shootings! Wonderfully done, btw!

Throughout it all, if she'd ever had a dream it was to have someone at her back. Someone she could talk to about anything and everything. Someone who would encourage her to stand on her own, but would also stand beside her to hold her up if she needed or asked for the help. Someone who would look past her flawed personality and screwed up past to see the woman who wanted the little girl's dream of a happily ever after. Even when that same ephemeral dream made her sneer when she heard the phrase aloud. She wanted someone to whom it wouldn't matter that her version of happily every after included minimal personal time, a sometimes dangerous job and visits to the range instead of picket fences, society parties and 2.5 kids.

Loved that whole paragraph: so Mary!

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siapom July 31 2010, 23:11:41 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!

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