Fanfiction: Verbal Impotence

[rainbowwizard1]

Title: Verbal Impotence
Author: WHIZ
Pairing/Characters: Mary/Marshall
Rating: PG
Summary: Mary comes over to Marshall’s to talk after Denver.
Spoilers: 3x4 Whistle Stop
Author’s Notes: This isn’t my fault. Random made me do it! Apparently, I’m very easy to badger into writing. Also…I don’t actually like this fic very much. I dunno, it’s what fell

Comments

[randomrattle]

Argh!

First of all, I'm glad I'm to blame for fiction. This is a good thing.

I love the references to "Sunshine" and "Tell me what you need" ... but, ouchies, was this a hurty one! And unable to be resolved, either, because it wouldn't have worked for Mary to just latch onto Marshall this fast after breaking up with Raphael. Besides, she's got some growing to do.

Poor Marshall. And equally poor Mary, though she has got to have wondered if Marshall didn't love her somewhere along this way.

[rainbowwizard1]

Yeah, I'm pretty easy to badger into writing =D

I think you're right about Mary, she definitely wouldn't just jump into something with Marshall right after Raph (plus, I love angst! Happy ending? Pfft.)

[pipisafoat]

eep! *wants more* (i think i'm becoming predictable)

[rainbowwizard1]

Ask and ye shall receive! (Possibly)

Marshall may let me write a sequel, or he might just leave me alone and let me write my Juvenile Justice paper (and then my history paper...)

[vegawriters]

“Just hold me,” Mary whispers.
This got me. In three words it's the entire relationship. She will say it to no one else.

Well done. :)

[rainbowwizard1]

That really does seem to encapsulate their entire relationship. =) Glad you enjoyed it!

[likelike_love]

“What are you crying about up there, Doofus?”
This felt perfectly Mary.

“Yeah, but you’re you, not…you know.”

Marshall’s face falls and it feels like someone just ripped his heart out. “Right.”
Oh god, oh god, oh god.

Terrifically well-written but p-a-i-n-f-u-l to read. I agree with pip! I want more. And I think you left the door open for it!

Wonderful! Thanks for posting, WHIZ!

[rainbowwizard1]

Painful to read is also painful to write. And yeah, the door is definitely open and Marshall may let me walk through it. I dunno.

Glad you liked it spoon!! =D

[helovesmexx]

“Yeah, but you’re you, not…you know.”

Marshall’s face falls and it feels like someone just ripped his heart out. “Right.”

:(

[rainbowwizard1]

Marshall agrees with you. *nods*