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FIC: Venus Rising

Oct 12, 2009 00:19

Title: Venus Rising [on ao3]
Pairing: Mary/Marshall. Well. Kind of. Certainly nothing else.
Rating: NC-17. We've got smut, kiddos.
Summary: She has something more fun than paperwork to do this evening.
Spoilers: Absolutely nothing. Inspired by the flashback scene in Mary's house in Good Cop, Bad Cop
Author's Notes: Started in July for rounds_of_kink, then ( Read more... )

zzauthor: pipisafoat, fanfiction

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pipisafoat October 12 2009, 07:54:51 UTC

Hmm, I'm not sure he's into birds. (maybe if you offer him some of your pancakes...)

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pipisafoat October 12 2009, 15:39:00 UTC

Well, if he can't accept you the way you are, you can always make me pancakes and let me creep on you! (hold the chipmunks, please. just plain or buckwheat.)

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likelike_love October 11 2009, 23:25:24 UTC

When you tell people you promised me smut for it, you definitely make my hand adventures sound significantly dirtier than they actually were! :)

But, this is seriously HotHotHot. I love it! And that last line has a musicality to it... the time you spent futzing with it really paid off. This is excellent. Well done, peaches!

pipisafoat October 12 2009, 07:59:00 UTC

HA. Hand adventures. Well........ I was pretty much asleep when I wrote that?

A million years of looking at the file with two lines in it (the last one and the killing people one) and a title. Terrible, terrible. (Then in the end I changed the title anyway. Oh well.) Mostly it took forever because this is not how I normally write. Oh, and that I don't really do girls. (well, not in writing, I mean.) So musical and joyous. I think this tortellini is getting to my head.

sizzle astrilde October 12 2009, 00:10:34 UTC

Youch that was steamy. But what will Mary do when she goes back inside and her mom tells her that Marshall dropped by and told her she was outside and that as far as she knew he had gone outside? What about the next morning when she walks into the office, would he be abe to look at her without his mind going straight back to the night before?

Perhaps another version in which he gets to join her would be in order I think after all if you subscribe to the infinate universes theory then in at least one reality he did. Damn my best friend for being an astrophysycist!

Re: sizzle pipisafoat October 12 2009, 08:01:48 UTC

Do you really want to wait another four months for more? ;)

In my little head, Jinx just makes knowing faces at Mary, who ignores her, signs the stack of papers, and doesn't think any more of it. And Marshall is inexplicably awkward for a while. And don't listen to those silly astrophysicists. Fandom has been all over infinite universes since the dawn of time.

papillongirl October 12 2009, 00:56:12 UTC

Pip, that was steamy and yummy and a whole bunch of other flattering adjectives that my brain can't come up with right now because it's on p0rn overload! I want Marshall to go back out to the backyard, pull her out of the pool by the hair and throw down with his best friend right there on the pool deck. Dang, is there a sequel to this in the works? It's great as a standalone but it left me somewhat... Anywho, yum!

pipisafoat October 12 2009, 08:04:06 UTC

Thank ye kindly, darling Fly. And nope, no sequel, just some crazy thing with ghosts and hummingbirds and pizza abuse. But it's forever away from being done anyway.

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pipisafoat October 12 2009, 08:04:23 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked!