Public Display for Cousin Shelley

Aug 15, 2010 21:07

Title: Public Display
Author: a_q
Recipient: Cousin Shelley
Fandoms: Iron Man / The Incredible Hulk
Rating: pg
Warnings: none
Author's note: This story is a variation from the story idea suggested in the prompt.

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likeadeuce September 14 2010, 03:48:24 UTC
This is a great exploration of the relationships. I love the idea of Pepper's unique combat boots.

This is a great line:
"It was always wisest to distract Tony with shiny objects, this time the admiring crowd would do."

Good story!

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a_q September 14 2010, 17:44:14 UTC
Thank you! :)

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cousinshelley September 14 2010, 04:50:26 UTC
It was always wisest to distract Tony with shiny objects, this time the admiring crowd would do.

Yes, Tony does like shiny objects and hordes of admirers, doesn't he? Part of his considerable charm.

I like that Pepper hasn't shown Tony the painting because he'd buy it but not really care about it, and she didnt' want that. That's a nice, and I think very true, touch. I also like how Tony calls Pepper "my girl" and calls Bruce by his last name all in one sentence in a not-so-subtle bit of chest beating.

Thank you for the story!

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a_q September 14 2010, 17:46:41 UTC
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you like it even though I didn't follow the prompt exactly - though I tried to keep the spirit of it.
:)

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