Comments | martinicruiser: This is me for forever

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

This is me for forever

Jul 07, 2008 16:31

Title: Shattered Glass: Once And For All (4 ( Read more... )

jazz, sideswipe, sunstreaker, shatteredglass

Comments 14

trunks_angel July 7 2008, 21:41:24 UTC

*peers up from behind her computer desk* MEEP! Poor Siders! You can't leave it there! Gah! What happeeeeeeens?!?! *sees Optimus, goes back to hiding*

vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:17:30 UTC

What happens next won't be pretty I'm afraid. DX *pets and gives good Optimus Plushie* Thanks for reading!

cmdrtekk July 7 2008, 22:33:43 UTC

Great look at Jazz and Ricochet as you have them.

vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:18:24 UTC

Thank you! Glad you like it so far.

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vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:20:12 UTC

Glad you're liking it so far, thanks for reading! :3

dark_daebereth July 8 2008, 03:08:44 UTC

Sideswipe! Don't break him! Ooooh, cannot wait to see where you go next.
That was a wonderful explanation of both sets of twins as well, great comparison.

vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:21:57 UTC

It won't be exactly pretty. The angst level will go up a liiiittle bit. XD Glad you like the insight about both pairs of twins! Thank you for reading.

dark_daebereth July 9 2008, 06:23:07 UTC

But, yay for angst? :D

vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:27:02 UTC

XD Possibly!

mmouse15 July 8 2008, 04:01:30 UTC

I love the comparison between Sunny/Sides and Jazz/Ricochet, and there was a sense of doom over the whole trip to Prime *shudder*, and it was a wonderful chapter and at the end there was Optimus. Brrr! Now it's going to be scary, but I want more. This storyline is sucking me into this crazy reality...

vejiraziel July 9 2008, 06:26:30 UTC

Ohhh the part with Prime is going to be interesting. >w> Gonna dwelve a bit in why Sideswipe joined him in the first place. Mwahaha. D: Yeah, SG Prime's skery stuff. Glad you like it so far, thanks for reading!