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dark_daebereth June 2 2008, 11:10:21 UTC
Prowl calling out Uncle Hashet is too cute!
Nice look at the background of slaves in general, and sweet little friendship interaction.
Gorgeous work again!

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vejiraziel June 3 2008, 05:17:01 UTC
Prowl was a very cute sparkling. Bwahahahaa. I'm glad you're liking this so far! Thanks for reading!

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trunks_angel June 2 2008, 11:34:07 UTC
D'awww, uncle Hashet! I can just image a wee!Prowl shouting that out X33

I love background stories explaining how certain characters met and the interactions between them! Wonderful ficcy ^^

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vejiraziel June 3 2008, 05:18:00 UTC
Yessss X3 cute wittle Prowl calling Ratchet 'Uncle Hashet'. Glad you've liked it, there's quite a bit more in 'background' stories in store for this plot. Thansk for reading!

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prowlsgirl June 2 2008, 13:12:22 UTC
Awww. Poor Prowl. Can't wait for more.

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vejiraziel June 3 2008, 05:18:20 UTC
More has been written! Thanks for reading!

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ex_naggingf June 2 2008, 13:12:39 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee update! *bounces in chair*

Great chapter ♥ ..it was interesting to read about the background of Wheeljack, and how Ratchet/Ironhide met.

Poor Prowl..well I hope Jazz makes him come to his senses soon.

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vejiraziel June 3 2008, 05:23:32 UTC
Yes, yes, I hadn't been able to update this plot in a while and it was due for some lovin'. Oh the Prowl/Jazz adventures will keep coming, don't worry. XD Thank you for reading!

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nekohitori June 2 2008, 14:03:12 UTC
D'aaww... I was waiting for this chappy. And I can definitely see how Red's paranoia plays into his over-protectiveness with his only child.

One thing, though: A sparkling in an investment and they require regular upgrades, education, constant maintenance.

I think you mean "A sparkling is an investment..."

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vejiraziel June 3 2008, 05:25:46 UTC
Yes, yes. I gotta fix that, thank you for pointing it out!

Oh yes, Red Alert's overprotective because he's always thinking the worst case scenario. But he's still a very lovin' daddy. XD

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