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May 31, 2008 06:24

Title: The Color of Touch - Green Silk (Part 6 out of 6 ( Read more... )

prowlxjazz, jazz, pxj challenges: may 08, prowl

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purajo May 31 2008, 11:42:20 UTC
There's just something very... sexy... about the way Prowl says "Beloved". I dont know why, but there just is.

Gyuh... much meltage, and its not like mine at all, so I wouldnt worry about comparisons XD.

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vejiraziel May 31 2008, 21:08:32 UTC
Oh, believe me, I know. Everytime I was writting him saying that I just could hear him in my head and brain was going melty melty. Damn that sexy 'bot. *cough* Glad you liked it, and thank you for reading! <3

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trunks_angel May 31 2008, 11:53:07 UTC
*Has melted into yet another Halo-puddle* GUH! That was so gorgeous and so very hawt! Excellent work sweetie! I think my brain will remain in a semi melted state from now on! XD!

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vejiraziel May 31 2008, 21:39:42 UTC
Liquified brains for all! XD Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! *huggles*<3 Thank you for reading!

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duchesslucrezia May 31 2008, 16:30:03 UTC
*is a very happy puddle* Guh, Prowl...so hot...:d~~

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vejiraziel May 31 2008, 21:40:02 UTC
Yay, more puddles! :D Glad you liked it?

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duchesslucrezia May 31 2008, 23:13:22 UTC
Definately :d~

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jaxink May 31 2008, 16:30:32 UTC
Is it unbearably hot in here, or is it just me? Damn! Hot stuff!!

Loved Jazz's anger and underlying concern for poor Prowler. Take better care of yourself, Prowl! And Prowl's manner of making it up to Jazz...perfect. The desperation and need Jazz felt was deliciously intensifying every step of the way.

Loved it. Entirely. Great job on the challenge!! ^^

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vejiraziel May 31 2008, 22:11:55 UTC
*fans you?*

Oh yes, I think Jazz would be one of the first to want to beat some sense into Prowl for being so careless with himself in favor of working. Oh yes, when Prowl decides he's going to make up for something, he goes the whole mile.

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for reading!

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mmouse15 May 31 2008, 18:00:24 UTC
Congratulations on doing the challenge, Veji. We knew you could do it and do it so very well. *purr*

Jazz is just so good at showing how mad he is without losing control - I really liked that.
Then Prowl decides to 'make it up' to Jazz and Oh, heavens above, it's sexy and hot and amazing and wow. Wonderful stuff that just melted my brain. Prowl is so sexy...and I love the way he talks to Jazz. So amazing and yummy.

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vejiraziel May 31 2008, 22:31:04 UTC
I need to stop taking on the challenges at the last possible moment. XD

I thought Jazz would be able to keep his cool while also demonstrating he was pretty pissed off at Prowl if no stress is getting at him. Yesss, Prowl had to make up to Jazz somehow, don't you think? XD I thought it would be sexy to have Prowl talk to Jazz like that. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!

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