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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Ow ow ow OW!

May 21, 2008 03:14

Title: Forgotten Lament - Redeemer and Destroyer ( Read more... )

prowlxjazz, jazz, prowl

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vejiraziel May 22 2008, 01:11:10 UTC

I'm sorry it made you cry, but it was necessary to bring the 'Reaver' side into play. I'm glad you liked it, though!

okami_myrrhibis May 21 2008, 13:48:46 UTC

YAY!!! And nice nod to "if Prime, why not others?" LoT...

Gods, just beautiful!!!

Hope your knee gets better soon!

vejiraziel May 22 2008, 01:19:41 UTC

I just couldn't leave everyone else dead when Prime's walking around and Prowl (despite his new peculiarities...) are 'living and wiggling'. XD

Glad you like it, and I hope my damn knee gets better soon, too. @_@

ryagelle May 21 2008, 13:54:52 UTC

That was just... wow. Yeah. Wow.

vejiraziel May 21 2008, 23:10:09 UTC

o_o good wow or bad wow?

ryagelle May 22 2008, 00:36:32 UTC

Oh, good, definitely good. ^.^

vejiraziel May 22 2008, 01:05:54 UTC

Yeey!

kyra_neko_rei May 21 2008, 14:01:02 UTC

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK, if there's one thing I flat-out love, it's angst getting turned around into a happy ending. THANK YOU!!!

vejiraziel May 21 2008, 23:37:18 UTC

I am too sappy of a person and I suffer if I can't give them a happy ending after putting them through hell. XD Thank -you- for reading.

kyra_neko_rei May 21 2008, 23:53:27 UTC

I'm the EXACT same way.

sakon76 May 21 2008, 14:37:01 UTC

Ooh, I love this. Any chance of a sequel? Since you're hinting that Prowl isn't quite normal anymore and the consequences of that could be... intriguing.

"To spin the wheel of fate, and be the conduit through which the souls that refused to let go of their mortal existence could be sent to meet their fate."... hate to break it to you, Prowl, you being so dutiful and all (when not depressed to the Pit and back), but you kind of missed one there. A big one. Starscream. *snicker*

vejiraziel May 21 2008, 23:13:14 UTC

Well, Screamer's spark is basically impossible to 'destroy' so I think it wouldn't be exactly easy to send it to the matrix when it's not 'extinguished', really. If you ask me, Screamer would be better to be 'the reaver'. Except knowing screamer he'd do way too many bad things with those powers, so Prowl it is!

Ahhh a sequel, there might be one if I can work out the kinks of a few ideas floating my mind in this regard. And yeup, Prowl's not quite normal anymore. XD

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading!