Comments | martinicruiser: And Love will steer the stars~

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

And Love will steer the stars~

Apr 23, 2008 18:52

Title: Aquarius - Down to One Knee ( Read more... )

crack, prowlxjazz, jazz, prowl, fan fiction

Comments 66

jaxink April 24 2008, 00:13:18 UTC

*giggles madly* Spectacular!! So happy you decided to run with this!

Loved Prowl's "predicament" and murderous urges to kill some of his fellow Autobots. And the bit about how a bonding ceremony would have worked for high ranking military officers was really interesting and well thought out.

And Red! Hahahahahaha! Poor Red...poor Inferno! "Oh, sweet Primus, not again! Red!" Inferno knelt down and shook his mate desperately.

Hahahahahahahahaha. Awesome.

vejiraziel April 24 2008, 00:36:07 UTC

Hey, someone else aside Prowl had to crash! XD *snrk* Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

cmdrtekk April 24 2008, 00:17:55 UTC

Very well done. Laughed my way through this one. Glad to see that the teaser was followed through. With an even larger teaser. Poor Red Alert. Guess It was a good thing it was done at the Officers meeting so that Ratchet was already on site.

vejiraziel April 24 2008, 00:36:42 UTC

Yes, yes, It's a good thing Ratchet was already in there. Poor Red, though. XD Thanks for reading!

__wilderness__ April 24 2008, 00:18:12 UTC

*has such a huge smile on her face*

I so completely do not mind being blamed for this wonderfully adorable piece of adorableness!

loop-sided smile... take out one of the o's in loop to make it lopsided!

vejiraziel April 24 2008, 00:35:10 UTC

XDD Glad you liked it so far! And I shall correct that. Thank you! :D

nova_myth April 24 2008, 01:12:40 UTC

Mahaha! Yes, the insanity begins. But how you gonna get Soundwave and his brood into this? o.O Or are your plans changed? Hm? Can't wait, either way. XD

vejiraziel April 24 2008, 02:21:27 UTC

That's for me to know and you to find out >:3

kyra_neko_rei April 24 2008, 19:21:30 UTC

*eyes light up* This means more?

hellsangelcurse April 24 2008, 01:48:34 UTC

I love being evil!
And if you keep writing work like this I'll have to be so more often!
I can't wait for the rest of it.

Don't worry Red they'll make it up to you!

hellsangelcurse April 24 2008, 02:16:14 UTC

Wait! Wait! I just realized something when rereading this!

Jazz hasn't actually said yes!

vejiraziel April 24 2008, 02:20:55 UTC

I implied he accepted when he smiled at Prowl. I managed to have this whole chapter without Jazz saying a single word. e.e;;a

hellsangelcurse April 24 2008, 04:14:42 UTC

Yeah, but I can see Prowl needing a verbal confirmation, but hey that's me.

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