The pressure's high, just to stay alive. 'Cause the heat is on

[vejiraziel]

Title: Honey, Prime, I shrunk the Kids Officers!
Chapter: Chapter 16 - The heat is on, on the street Smokescreen

Comments

[__wilderness__]

*giggles* That was just too cute!! Prowl putting on a sound and light show Jazz would be proud of! I had to stop reading and just laugh for a moment at the mental image that produced!!!!!

Only a couple of nitpicks...
If Sunstreaker had been in his robot mode he would have raised an optic ridge at Sunstreaker's offer. Sunstreaker, then Bluestreaker, right? And there was a speed somewhere that seemed wrong, but I can't find it again... so it might just have been me misreading...

[vejiraziel]

I'm pretty sure Jazz would demand copies of those memories for his personal amusement. XD He's such a cop baby. XDD Glad it made you giggle, thanks for reading!

Fixed the double Sunstreakerness, thankies! >w>/

[trunks_angel]

I think I have just been keeled DED of cute by that chase scene and wee!Prowl's lights and sirens going off while yelling "Bad Smoskeen!" *falls out of chair with squeee*

And yes, Bluestreak is not quite the innocent mech most make him out to be and Sunstreaker is SOOOO not complaining! XDDD!

Another brilliant chapter, I love it!

[vejiraziel]

The chase scene wasn't even planned for this chapter, but the Prowl muse took over and this happened. XDD I loved writing it! Glad you liked it! >:3

Oh yes, Sunny ain't complaining about Bluestreak being not so innocent. XD

[ladyrhiannon873]

That was awesome.All little kids,sparklings in this case,love car rides.

[vejiraziel]

Especially driving them! XD Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

[bumblebee_1983]

Entirely too cute! Baby Prowl just melts me into a puddle of gooiness.

^_^

Especially when he patted Smokescreen on the face, letting him off on a little warning. Tooo cute!!

[vejiraziel]

The sparkling Prowl muse is determined to assassinate as many people as he can with his cuteness, and he's doing a fine work with me. XD

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading! :3

[bumblebee_1983]

Prowl is doing a very good job at that!

There should be a count kept up on how many people have died from baby-prowl cuteness. :D

And who would not like a baby prowl? Hehe.

[kyra_neko_rei]

*DELIGHT*

Awww, that was SOOO wonderfully cute! Prowl's light show was the BEST! And ooooh, boy, Prime taking care of Sideswipe . . . *snicker snicker*

[vejiraziel]

I just -had- to have Prowl using his sirens and police lights at least once as a baby >:3 Oh, yes, Prime's gonna be a very worn out mech the next morning. XD;