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__wilderness__ March 26 2008, 13:17:45 UTC
*snickers* Poor 'Warp.. being subjected to those images by daddy-dearest... Sunstorm sounds as though he could give Chromia a run for her money on the whole embarrassing the kids lark!

And wow... was not expecting that development with Tracks... am intrigued to see where that goes...

Soap opera stuff is good if it's like this!!

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vejiraziel March 26 2008, 20:23:00 UTC
Ohhh they're both so very bad. Only reason Chromia probably hasn't embarassed her spawns with that is because she COULD make Prowl crash and go straight to stasis lock. XD

Bwahahahaa... >:3 Soap Opera I say! Glad you liked it and thanks for reading! XD

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ex_naggingf March 26 2008, 15:18:18 UTC
This is marvelous! I giggled at the scene between Sunstorm and his sons. No one can embarrass you like a parent XD

Aha now we know why Shockwave is against slaves so much! Wonder what Blaster will do when he finds out about Tracks.

Excellent chapter ♥

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vejiraziel March 26 2008, 20:45:31 UTC
Yes, Shockwave is an asshole on this but he has his reasons. He's still a jerk nonetheless, but well, at least you can understand why he's so bitter. He doesn't want to see Blaster going through the same, even if really the circumstances are different. XD;

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

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mmouse15 March 26 2008, 19:39:33 UTC
Echoing n-f-w!

Great chapter. Wow, I wasn't expecting that about Tracks, but it sure explains a lot.
As embarrassing as he is, Sunstorm actually gave Starscream really good advice - find out now. That way you won't have regrets.
Sigh. I love this story line. I suppose I'll love the western one too when the plot bunnies get too much for you.

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vejiraziel March 26 2008, 19:41:10 UTC
Suffice to say I'm plotting with NK. Fear. XD

Glad you liked it! I made sure to get this one out ASAP for you especially. >:3

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mmouse15 March 26 2008, 20:34:30 UTC
You did? You are so sweet. Thank you!

Oh, I never fear when you and NK plot. The results are always excellent and worthwhile. I'm looking forward to it...

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vejiraziel March 26 2008, 20:44:13 UTC
You seem to like this one so much and that makes me happy so I try not to keep readers like you hanging for too long if I can help it XD

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