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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Fell so asleep I didn't get to post this earlier @A@;

Sep 15, 2012 23:48

Title: An Empty Tome - Book Three - Fan, Spear, Heart and War
Prompt: "Xing Zhan." + Our Love is Everlasting
Verse: G1/DWis/IDWish mix and mash
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1411
Warnings:This is really sucktastic! And I'll eventually get to why that fan is there.
Notes: For the anniversary challenge @ prowlxjazz.

Not Beta Read.

( Empty-handed we fight and defend through tricks of the mind
Daring to take on even iron ramparts and bronze walls
This life, this journey will not have been in vainr. )

prowlxjazz, au, pxj challenges: september 12

Comments 12

eerian_sadow September 16 2012, 07:01:58 UTC

beautiful. just the right amount of emotion and light-hearted laughter. :D they were just adorable here.

jarakrisafis September 16 2012, 07:28:30 UTC

Not ntirely sure Shockwave will be as impressed with his souvenir as Jazz was to leave it!

silberstreif September 16 2012, 10:07:05 UTC

Suspense, drama, and still humour, it made me smile despite the surroundings. :) "Insane and sparkless" for sending his own bondmate into Shockwave's base... yeah, that would probably the normal reaction. But Prowl trusted Jazz. I like it the irony how the commander said that the result of the plan rests on Prowl's spark - he was even more right than he thought.
Beautiful entry!

purajo September 16 2012, 12:22:54 UTC

Yeeaahhh.... I think I'm just about the only one who'll get the nod to the fan, spear and particular prompt you've used ;) Nice touch... I can never unsee those two as Prowl and Jazz now. Jazz with a spear... hmmmm.... ideas ideas.... Nice job :D

camfield September 16 2012, 14:09:23 UTC

Awesome story! It made me giggle, the dialogue was perfect and the bit of tension made it all the more sweeter. <3