Challenge ficlet

Oct 08, 2011 01:50

Title: The Dark of the Night
Week: 4
Prompt: "Friens till the bitter end."
Verse: G1 WFC/Exodus
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1019
Warnings: Spoilers for the Exodus novel.
Summary: War took much from him but also gave him two of his best soldiers and closest friends.
Notes: For the Prowl x Jazz Anniversary challenge @ prowlxjazz. Happy Anniversary to all in the pxj ( Read more... )

war for cybertron, prowlxjazz, pxj challenges: september 11, optimus prime

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usagi_atemu_tom October 8 2011, 12:28:38 UTC
An interesting story told from Optimus point of view, which puts an interesting, new light on the relationship between Jazz and Prowl.
The story had a bit of sadness, but also hope to offer. I certainly liked reading this through.

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fianna9 October 8 2011, 12:57:05 UTC
It's always fun to get a new perspective on Jazz and Prowl's relationship. Optimus was the perfect choice to show us how the two of them interact, both with him and each other. I enjoyed reading this.

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bluebirdsoaring October 8 2011, 13:24:04 UTC
Nice POV change in a sad but hopeful piece - they are going toward something after all. They don't know what, yet, but still they are trying to follow the wisdom of the Matrix to where it might lead them. I love the characters you build here =) They stop short of just wacking Optimus over the head, but still poke him in the right direction he needs!!

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renegadewriter8 October 8 2011, 14:45:11 UTC
Loved seeing their friendship from someone else's perspective! Great job!

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