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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Well whaddaya know. I wrote stuff.

May 15, 2011 02:33

Title: Bring Him Down (01/01)
Verse: Shattered Glass AU
Rating: NC-17 like seriously.
Words: 5288
Characters: Jazz, Ricochet.
Warnings: Violence, Non-con, twincest, sticky. Possibly triggering.
Summary: Ricochet's jealousy, rancor and obsession become too much to bear and he decides it's time to act and set a record straight.
Notes: I got a random ( Read more... )

jazz, sticky, shatteredglass, nc-17, non-con, ricochet

Comments 12

anavidbookworm June 2 2011, 11:50:37 UTC

Well that was rather intense. I have a feeling that Ricochet will be paying for this little stunt for a long time. To think that he wasn't the favorite before without anyone sabotaging him but now he has Jazz trying to stab him in the back. The dumb idiot has no idea what he's in for. :)

vejiraziel June 2 2011, 17:55:14 UTC

Ricochet's jealousy really got the best of him, and he's gonna regret it every second of his life.

from Christina anonymous June 6 2011, 00:59:26 UTC

Powerfully dark. Ricochet's actions are deranged and depraved. You handled the situation in a way that did not deny the depths of darkness in the SG universe, yet still kept this story as dark for Jazz as it should be.

It sounds to me like it does happen some time before "Baby You're Sick", just because I can't see Ricochet not doing something to "that Decepticon" if he was truly Jazz's property now. I can also see Jazz, once he has possession of Prowl, carrying through with his threat to destroy Ricochet.

You kept a sharp contrast in the set up of the two stories, as well as the desires shown. Ricochet seems to want to conquer and destroy his twin; Jazz seems to want to seduce and persuade Prowl.

I hope your muse comes back, because I would love to read more in this universe.