Challenge Day 27, no I didn't forget. Work's been eating me alive.

Sep 27, 2010 02:54

Title: It's More than a Feeling - Colegiala (Schoolgirl) (27/30)
Day: Sept 27
Prompt: "I didn't expect you to take it literally!"
Verse: G1
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1104
Other Characters: Mention of Wheeljack, Decepticons in general.
Warnings: Humanized TFs, Gender bending, a bit of groping, generous amounts of crack.
Summary: When Prowl said they ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, crack, au, human/holo, genderbending

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mmouse15 November 16 2010, 13:15:38 UTC
Nice to know that there was a reason they're human! I really like this backstory, Veji, and it's awesome that Jazz is so in-tune with himself, even in a new body.

Poor Prowl, though! He's human and Jazz still gropes him!

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vejiraziel November 16 2010, 16:47:41 UTC
I didn't wat the to be human just because, specially since they were going to be posing as teenagers, and it seemed plausible to me they would do it in this kind of situation.

And I've probably been watchin too many crime/forensics shows. =3=

Prowl is doomed to be gropped by Jazz in any shape he takes. He knows he secretly likes it. Thak you for reading :>

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wicked3659 November 16 2010, 21:06:01 UTC
Hahahaha cracktastic! Nicely done, very fun little ficlet here. I bet they look positively adorable in their outfits. Prowl only pretends to hate it and the groping lol :p

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vejiraziel November 16 2010, 23:48:49 UTC
They certainly would make Britney Spears ashamed of showing her facein a schoolgirl outfit next to them, and they don't even need to show skin! XD

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nekohitori November 17 2010, 02:46:21 UTC
I say we need to see pictures of these schoolgirl bots, and I hope you plan on eventually expanding on this ficlet. I'd really like to see this play out.

Also, something I noticed: towards the end in the sentence, "...Carol was advanced a grace and then enrolled..." I think you meant 'grade' instead of 'grace.'

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purajo November 17 2010, 13:05:58 UTC
*cackles* so this is why you asked me... You'd think Prowl would have realized right now that Jazz's groping is simply retaliation for all the times Prowl gropes him/her.

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vejiraziel November 18 2010, 21:06:48 UTC
Yeah, this is why XD Oh Prowl knows it but doesn't want to admit s/he gropes Jazz probably more than Jazz gropes him/her

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