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Challenge Day 20 (And 10 to go!)

Sep 20, 2010 06:16

Title: It's More than a Feeling - The Instinct. (20/30)
Day: Sept 20
Prompt: "Animal Instinct"
Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1982
Other Characters: Hound, Ratchet, Cliffjumper, Optimus Prime. Other mechs that I am leaving to your interpretation.
Warnings: This is me taking the prompt a little literal. Prepare for crack.
Summary: Hound loved ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, hound, crack, prowlxjazz, au

Comments 13

artemis10002000 September 27 2010, 12:32:09 UTC

Ooooh, I love it! And they're saved in the end, yay!

This story puts me in mind of a G1/Beast Wars crossover :)

vejiraziel September 27 2010, 22:55:48 UTC

It was inspired partly in Beast Wars/Hearts of Steel. I wanted to make certain they were still mechanical, that the wolf forms were just Alt Modes and camouflage but they were trapped in them and had to 'adapt' until they could transform again.

bluebirdsoaring September 27 2010, 12:51:03 UTC

It's fun good crack =) I can see Prowl leading the others no matter what form or what circumstances!!

prowlsgirl September 27 2010, 13:03:00 UTC

Awww that's a cute story. ^_^

wicked3659 September 27 2010, 13:49:03 UTC

I thought this was really cleverly done and beautifully written. Lovely piece of work <3

vejiraziel September 27 2010, 22:54:23 UTC

Thank you. :> Had to try for a slightly different approach

mmouse15 September 27 2010, 14:54:35 UTC

Ooo, Veji, I really like this response to the prompt! What a wonderful idea, and written out in your wonderful way to be a beautiful story. I love it!

vejiraziel September 27 2010, 22:52:40 UTC

I wanted to try something a liiiiiiittle different. Didn't want to go with 'wolf-formers' exactly but more like mixing in some Beast Wars kind of approach. XD

Glad you liked it! :>