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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Challenge Day 16

Sep 16, 2010 10:26

Title: It's More than a Feeling - Strangers (16/30)
Day: Sept 16
Prompt: "We've worn the cloak of secret lives, we've seen the truth, magic that we send..."
Verse: G1 with a bit of WFC/Exodus influence.
Rating: PG
Words: 902
Other Characters: Mentions of Sentinel Prime, Primus, Alpha Trion.
Warnings: None I can think of.
Summary: We've lived the ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, prowlxjazz, au

Comments 10

wicked3659 September 18 2010, 15:43:57 UTC

I change my mind, I think Prowl is the redeemer Jazz is the observer :p he he

I love this very original, very well done <3

vejiraziel September 18 2010, 15:46:56 UTC

You would be correct in that assumption. XD I wanted to trick people a little, it was just so 'obvious' the Observer could be Prowl's role, had to spice things up a lil'. Thankies<3

purajo September 18 2010, 15:57:21 UTC

Ahhh I got them right... Mostly thanks to Jazz's cultural investigator role in Exodus and the bit of explanation they gave.

This was an interesting one..

vejiraziel September 18 2010, 16:00:44 UTC

That's exactly why I gave that role to Jazz, kekekeke.

Yeah this one went a tad weird.

insane_no_baka September 18 2010, 17:46:13 UTC

Oooh! I was debating on who the Redeemer was and who the Observer was so I had to go and re-read it again. So....curious...is Prowl the Redeemer? Since he'd lose his 'ability to feel' when he gives the Matrix to Optimus? Then when he meets Jazz, he'd get it again! *feels proud of self*

vejiraziel September 19 2010, 14:03:49 UTC

Yep, Prowl is the Redeemer.

mmouse15 September 19 2010, 02:29:31 UTC

Oh, wow, Veji, this is amazing! I love it, and I have to admit I was debating which was Prowl and which was Jazz until the removal of the Matrix made it clear. It's beautifully written, and I really like this explanation of the TF origins and the roles Prowl and Jazz play in the evolution of the species.

*applauds*

vejiraziel September 19 2010, 13:41:27 UTC

Thank you, Mousey. This was a difficult prompt to work with, admittedly. I might expand on this later on. >w>;;

prowlerprime September 19 2010, 19:06:53 UTC

So you came up with the prompt! Thanks for giving me a headache and making me stress out! lol

Anyways, Jazz to me was the Observer. I just felt that was him after my first impression of reading it. As always, a lovely piece, wonderfully written!!