Challenge day 13

Sep 13, 2010 03:13

Title: It's More than a Feeling - All Sparks (13/30)
Day: Sept 13
Prompt: "hey didn't get together often, so they made the most of the time they had"
Verse: TFA
Rating: PG-13
Words: 747
Other Characters: Ensemble of various mentioned characters.
Warnings: Might need a tissue.
Summary: Cybertron was different now. Everyone was different now.
Notes: ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, tf:animated, prowlxjazz

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wicked3659 September 15 2010, 08:20:15 UTC
Awww this was bittersweet and lovely. Beautifully written, I love it *wibbles and hugs ninjas*

<3

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vejiraziel September 15 2010, 08:23:56 UTC
I know. =3= That's how the prompt presented itself with me xD<3 they need to stop killin' these two!

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purajo September 15 2010, 09:14:15 UTC
Aawwww *wibble*

And yes they do need to give us at least one continuity where these two both get to live. (IDW not counted).

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vejiraziel September 17 2010, 13:28:25 UTC
No kidding. >:

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prancingtiger86 September 15 2010, 12:16:16 UTC
That was so beautifully written, and the end actually brought tears to my eyes. Nicely done! :)

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mdnytryder September 15 2010, 12:47:14 UTC
Both sad and uplifting, showing even in death, you need not completely loose a beloved companion. Nicely done.

I agree that the 'Powers That Be' should stop killing them off.

[and one little spelling mistake - "...Jass could almost say the young one was Prowl reborn."

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vejiraziel September 17 2010, 13:27:39 UTC
Got it and changed it. Thank you :>

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prowlsgirl September 15 2010, 13:40:48 UTC
Awww sad and sweet at the same time.

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