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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Challenge day 10

Sep 10, 2010 23:42

Title: It's More than a Feeling - And the Worlds End (10/30)
Day: Sept 10
Prompt: "Prowl used to be a what?!"
Verse: G1 probably very AU
Rating: PG 13
Words: 1262
Other Characters: Red Alert, Inferno, Ratchet, Megatron.
Warnings: Another that went a little dark.
Summary: Of all mechs, Red Alert never thought it could be him.
Notes: For the Sexy ( Read more... )

pxj challenges: september 10, prowlxjazz, au, ratchet, red alert, inferno

Comments 11

purajo September 11 2010, 09:57:58 UTC

I sure hope Prowl appreciates the lengths Jazz goes to and through for him ;P

vejiraziel September 11 2010, 10:01:03 UTC

I'm certain Prowl does appreciate and shows said appreciation to Jazz thoroughly. ;)

wicked3659 September 11 2010, 10:03:46 UTC

Ooooh *intrigued* I must know more *cackle* mooooaaarr I say moooooaaaar!

*cough* I mean, this is a really great ficlet ^_^;; but you're ebil for dangling that carrot in front of us lol, and poor Red!

vejiraziel September 11 2010, 10:06:40 UTC

I might be persuaded to write more about this if my bunny cooperates. ;3

Glad you liked it!

eerian_sadow September 11 2010, 16:01:10 UTC

*feeds bunny*

wick's right. there needs to be more of this one. ^_^

prowlerprime September 11 2010, 14:19:45 UTC

ak! you HAVE to continue!!! you can't tease us like that!!! sends over bunches of carrots for the bunny!

ok, my spaztic moment is over. NIce job! I loved the picture you painted of Sundance. He sounded sexy (yes, I used to be a decepticon back in the 80s when G1 first aired). Perhaps an actual drawing? hehe. Sorry. Great job look forward to more of this one!

insane_no_baka September 11 2010, 14:28:53 UTC

*gapes* Gosh, that was awesome! I'm am so glad I managed to get this prompt in the list cause what's been read has been seriously cool. *bounces* I really liked how you used the prompt to have PROWL be a previous Decepticon sympathizer. And also have him be a prominent artist. Wicked! My absolute fave part though was at the end when Jazz is so protective and willing to do anything to keep it a secret. *shivers* Will there be more? *trying not to cling and beg* 8D

insane_no_baka September 11 2010, 14:31:25 UTC

*cough* WRITTEN. What's been WRITTEN is seriously cool. *headdesk* I'm too busy squealing to re-read over what I've written. ^^;;

bluebirdsoaring September 11 2010, 14:37:02 UTC

What a very interesting idea!!! And the little details about Sundance, right up to how he had designed the sigil for the Cons...wow!! I wonder about Prowl humming that tune - is he finally ready for the truth to come out, or was it simply a lapse? And Jazz to the rescue.

Which begs more of this story!! Was Prowl deep undercover as Sundance? My guess is no, given how involved and public he was...but I really am dying to know what it was that changed him into the bot he is today!!