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Starting the week with Art

Aug 30, 2010 10:25

Title: The Art of Deception. (15 ( Read more... )

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wicked3659 August 30 2010, 15:54:39 UTC

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Smokescreen is definitely sticking his nose in where it's going to get bitten off. He better be careful with testing and pushing Prowl, I doubt the mechlet is going to stand by and let him jeopardise everything he's been working for.

Also I love how Jazz is capable of disarming Prowl's anger, they have a real sweet dynamic going on, which is a lovely contrast to the darker side of Prowl.

And ooooh I have my theories about who's watching them *zips mouth* can't wait until next week!! ^__^;;

prancingtiger86 August 30 2010, 19:14:41 UTC

uh oh Smokescreen is definitely sticking his nose in where it doesn't belong, and it seems he better be careful about how he pushes Prowl or I can see some form of retaliation occuring. And I love the way Jazz is capable of soothing away Prowl's anger with just his presence. loved it and can't wait for the next update of this fantastic and intriguing fic!! :)

renegadewriter8 August 30 2010, 19:25:47 UTC

*sigh* ah Smokey Smokey Smokey, you are SO getting your aft kicked. Hmmm, I hope the two that were watching do something about it =D

Shakes make the world a better place no matter what planet you're on XD

bluetaelon August 30 2010, 19:56:51 UTC

wow, pissed off Prowl, you just know he's going to start doing evil stuff to Smokey that can't be traced back to him. Poor stupid Smokey lol!

purajo August 31 2010, 06:59:37 UTC

Rawrr.. Smokescreen needs to stop sticking himself in where he doesnt belong or he's gonna find himself with no way out.

*sits on Jazz just in case*

And I think I know who might be watching them...