To kickstart the week...

[vejiraziel]

Title: Sparkless. (24

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[selene_soulwar]

I love the Monday schedule. XDD Horrific subjects out of the way in the morning, and a free at the end of the day where I can read the new chapter of this wonderful series~ :D

Wonderfully intense, deep and just overall awesomeness. I love the character development, and strained, emotionally wounded Prowl's just so...fascinating. XDD

Thank you for making me smile on quite a stressful and generally shite day, darling. Much love and inspiration~

Also:

“Do you not know the sparkless freak my on people think me to be?”

I think that's meant to be 'own people'. C:

[prowlsgirl]

Poor Prowl

[bluebirdsoaring]

In spite of my original concerns that Lord Trax was up to no good in claiming Jazz, I stand corrected! This is a wonderful mech who is trying to ensure happiness for Jazz and Prowl. He really lays it all on the line for Prowl...which is what Prowl really needs to hear. Eager to see more =)

[crimsonseastorm]

Finally! We get a voice of reason...listen to Trax Prowl! I definitely think he has it right and thankfully he's seems to have gotten through to Prowl.

This was definitely a powerful chapter. I was hanging on to every word like a lifeline.

*pushes Prowl towards Jazz* Go! Go! You've got to make nice! I really think Jazzy will still be willing to pursue this...he's so in luv and he's something Prowl desperately needs...

Wonderful chapter! *wishes it was Monday again already* Can't wait till next week!

[eerian_sadow]

Trax is a smart mech, and he said everything Prowl needed to hear in just the perfect way to make it all make sense. i loved this bit of interaction here.

[vejiraziel]

I had a lot of fun writting this part with Trax. I think Prowl did need someone to tell him things in this way. Glad you liked!