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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

7 down and 6 to go D:

Oct 27, 2009 19:26

Title: This is Halloween - Ghost 7/13
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Implied character death.
Pairings: Take a guess.
Characters: Prowl.
Prompt: For the October Challenge of the ProwlxJazz community - Prompt: Ghost
Notes: Again, trying a sliiightly different approach to this one and it's based partly in Taoism, big emphasis in "partly". This piece if ( Read more... )

2007verse, sparkless, au, prowl, pxj challenges: october 09

Comments 20

snugsbunny October 28 2009, 01:36:54 UTC

Wow! Now this is sad and scary *shivers* The music does enhance the mood. I feel sad for Prowl having to do this, though I'm wondering if this perhaps also gave him a sense of closure. His own chance to say goodbye to his unborn child and to take comfort that his child was now at peace.

The ceremony was very interesting. The ceremonial items, especially the toys, lending only more sparkache for Prowl I think. Handling emblems of things I expect he wanted to give and see his own child playing with.

A very haunting addition to your other drabbles sweets.

Luffs and cuddles *and hides under duvet* <3

vejiraziel October 28 2009, 01:44:03 UTC

Yes, this drabble is perhaps the saddest in this collection. I just felt Sparkless and Prowl's story were perfect to use the Taoist belief of the Hungry Ghosts since it's a bit more ceremonial than festive.

Yes, I think while it's painful for Prowl, it was perhaps a chance for closure as well.

Glad you liked it my bun bun =w= *pets under the duvet*

eerian_sadow October 28 2009, 01:41:33 UTC

oh, that was heartbreaking. i felt awful for Prowl there.

vejiraziel October 28 2009, 01:45:39 UTC

Yes, Prowl really had to put up with a horrible task on this one.

prowlsgirl October 28 2009, 02:14:30 UTC

That's scarry and sad at the same time. -_-

vejiraziel October 29 2009, 08:21:48 UTC

That was the idea.

crimsonseastorm October 28 2009, 02:29:57 UTC

This was awesomely sad...I feel so sorry for Prowl! I'd personally place this before Prowl meets Jazz because I can't see Jazz missing this happening...it's just not like Jazz...excellent...but spark-breaking!

vejiraziel October 29 2009, 08:23:35 UTC

I left it intentionally for people to decide when this happens. And yes it's sad, it kinda... presented itself like that.

butterbean137 October 28 2009, 07:44:52 UTC

B'AWWWWWWW! Like poor Prowl needs any more reminders of his lost little bebe! ;-;

vejiraziel October 29 2009, 08:26:18 UTC

I know. DX But the prompt was screaming 'Sparkless' at every corner.