Well waddaya know, I postd fic! *gasp* Short stuff.

[vejiraziel]

Title: If Only You Knew.
Rating: R
Warnings: Mechs fantasizing about other mechs and near overloading to it?
Pairings: Prowl x Jazz
Characters: Jazz, Prowl.
Prompt: For the December Challenge of the mecha_erotica community: "What makes the Car a Car

Comments

[kyra_neko_rei]

Awwwww!

He needs to. So much.

[vejiraziel]

He needs to what? XD

[kyra_neko_rei]

Tell Prowl.

And then they need to interface.

On every horizontal surface in a two-mile radius. And then start working against the vertical ones.

[vejiraziel]

Ohhhh my. =w= *gigglefits* It'd be interesting to see how they work the vertical surfaces.

[poptartodoom]

This is lovely, like all of your fic. ^_^ I do have a crit, though- you said Wheeljack's alt is utilitarian, but he's a Lancia Stratos, which does not scream "utilitarian" to me. (Heh... Wheeljack's my favorite character, can you tell?)

[vejiraziel]

=w= I suppose this part of the note was skipped? "I wrote this inspired by the prompt but I had no intention to enter it in the challenge, as the characters are not based on their earth mode versions."

Wheeljack is not a Lancia Stratos in Cybertron. =W= He is rather blocky, kind of like a vanette in his Cybertronian form.

[eerian_sadow]

his alt was farily utilitarian on cybertron, though.

[eerian_sadow]

this was wonderful. even though they weren't in earth alts, i think this would have been very applicable for the contest.

highly enjoyed reading. ^^

[vejiraziel]

Well, I didn't submit it because I thought if people did not know what Prowl's cybertronian alt mode looks like they wouldn't get the idea too clearly.

I'm glad you liked it, though!

[meep311]

YAY!! A fic! *dances happily*
aww! it's so sweet! The way Jazz just looks at Prowl like he's a piece of art is written so beautifully. I love it!

[vejiraziel]

I think Jazz would definitely look at Prowl's alt mode and think of it as rather unique. Which curiously, it is. He's not a big tank or a blocky utilitarian vehicle like Ratchet, but he's not the slender kind of vehicle either he kind of stands out from his comrades.

[vejiraziel]

=w= I would like to think Jazz would see Prowl in such a way since he's fairly distinctive in his look compared to other bots and Jazz himself in his alt mode.