Comments | martinicruiser: And now postin' here. For the PJ challenge

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

And now postin' here. For the PJ challenge - Joy

Dec 27, 2007 23:48

Title: Sacrifice ( Read more... )

hound, prowl, red alert, jazz, mirage, blaster, twins, bluestreak, pxj challenges: december 07, trailbreaker, ratchet, fan fiction, inferno, prowlxjazz, wheeljack, ironhide, perceptor

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okami_myrrhibis December 28 2007, 15:00:41 UTC

Great job!!! I love the tie-in ;) to your pic. And can't wait tot see what Prowl got for Jazz!!!

But noticed a few typos: Prowl & police: "offering to weave away" should be "offering to waive all the requisites"

"sake of other's enjoyment" - others' enjoyment.

Brawl = Brawn (I hope)

on the way to the Ark to send him to his superiors - to the Ark to send to his superiors

vejiraziel December 28 2007, 20:48:27 UTC

You'll see soon oh and thanks for the double check, I'll fix those mistakes. Thank you very much <3 I'm glad you like it so far XD