I apologize for the upcoming spammage in advance!

[vejiraziel]

Title: Where there is - Home Is Where the Spark Is 3/6

Comments

[mmouse15]

Well, I didn't feel that Steeljaw or Beachcomber were OOC, but I base my knowledge of them off Jo's stories so I really can't judge.

I like this answer to the prompt. It's really good and gets to the crux of the matter wonderfully well, that it's easy to doubt the intentions of even your beloved when you don't communicate. Well done!

[vejiraziel]

I've always thought communication is one of the essential parts of life, especially in relationships of any kind. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading. <3

[eerian_sadow]

oh, this was beautiful! i think your steeljaw and beachcomber voices were perfectly spot on, so don't worry on that account. can't wait to see the last three parts of this challenge.

alos, my brother dropped in on me unexpectedly today and since i haven't seen him since his stepfather passed away in september, i spent my lunch hour with him and didn't make it to the post office. i'll get hound sent out tomorrow morning before work instead.

[vejiraziel]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It's alright, I am going to be ecstastic though if he makes it here in time for the arrival of my Mirages. That'd be awesome. >w>

[eerian_sadow]

such amazing timing would be delightful indeed.

[purajo]

And considering how much I write that lot, I'd know if it was OOC or not... and this was most definitely NOT OOC.

Steeljaw was fine, and very much in-character, silly lovable cat that he is, and Beachcomber was fine, too, with his subtle nudging and knowing smiles. I'd say you handled them pretty well.

And I personally loved Steeljaw flopping on Prowl's lap XD... he would so do that if given half the chance... kekeke

[vejiraziel]

I just thought Steeljaw would try to do that and could get away with it this time given the situation. XD

[kyra_neko_rei]

Mmmmmmmmmmmm. Nice.

Loving Steeljaw, too. Especially at the last.

[vejiraziel]

That last bit was my favorite from this! XD

[kyra_neko_rei]

For some reason, I am now picturing the Aerialbots and Starscream's trine to get lost/trapped somewhere by a storm, and Steeljaw to be the one to find them, all tangled up together in a jet-pile, and Steeljaw trying that on Starscream.

[vejiraziel]

That would be awesome. *snrk*

[prowlsgirl]

Awwww ^_^

[vejiraziel]

:D