Naked in midwinter magic

[vejiraziel]

Title: Shattered Glass: An Angel In The Snow(1/1

Comments

[dark_daebereth]

Ooooh, intrigue. All the characters are so interesting, the layering keeps going on and keeps drawing you in. Petal, the physical descriptions in this are fantastic, they make it so much more real, this is a wonderful piece of writing.

Ah, you must love Ricochet's method of dealing. But a really nice setup for Jazz's obsession. Lovely, can't wait to see where this goes. <3

[vejiraziel]

Ricochet's like permanently a teenager, violence and sex solve everything! XD Glad you like it so far, thanks for reading!

[cmdrtekk]

You have quite a bit of depth built into this loose storyline of yours. Keeps us hooked and desiring of more.

[vejiraziel]

It's pretty complex to be honest. I have so much set up for this thing... XD Glad find it interesting so far.

[vejiraziel]

Yeah, there's a story there about Rewind, and also Jazz and the medic. I am leaning towards Ratchet but we'll see. XD

[shiome]

Ah, I'm so bad at commenting in a timely (and regular) fashion, but this must be said: I've been following this AU with great interest, you got me hooked. I'll be looking forward to further developments!

[vejiraziel]

Glad this particular AU has your interest, hopefully more will be coming soon. :3 Thanks for reading!

[vejiraziel]

I was hoping I could make the Prowl x Jazzness crossfaction story be as reasonable as I could manage.

I am leaning more towards Ratchet myself since he strikes me more of a parental figure than First Aid. Thanks for reading, glad you like this story-line.