Comments | martinicruiser: It's angst weekend it seems.

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

It's angst weekend it seems.

Oct 05, 2008 07:05

Title: Until We Are One.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angstage. A bit of mutilation.
Pairings: Prowl x Jazz 2007verse. Implied Sunstreaker/Sideswipe x Bluestreak, Hound x Mirage.
Summary: "To you I will remain loyal and true, until we are one."
Notes: Blame dark_daebereth and snugsbunny for this one. It's their fault. Also, until I confirm 100% (Aka, until I watch the damn ( Read more... )

2007verse, prowlxjazz, jazz, sideswipe, sunstreaker, bluestreak, prowl

Comments 14

dark_daebereth October 5 2008, 12:47:23 UTC

;_;

*hugs*
That was beautiful, and so so sad. (Tissue warning ;_;) The oath and the chevron, that's something new, and it was just beautiful.
Mikaela's decision with the bouquet, god, that's perceptive of her. Goddess, the emotion in this, you can tell they're hurting and wishing for something better.
Love it, gorgeous, especially that bittersweet ending. <3

vejiraziel October 6 2008, 23:32:54 UTC

The reason I wanted to keep Jazz dead was because I wanted to play with Prowl's oath and do the part about him breaking his chevron as promise to Jazz.

The ending is bittersweet, yeah, but at least they're together now. Thank you for reading! *hugs*

purajo October 5 2008, 13:14:31 UTC

Heh... dont worry babe... nothing like Soul Mates. This is your own thing and it's awesome.

And I second the need for fluff!

vejiraziel October 6 2008, 23:33:23 UTC

Oh yes, much fluff is needed! *hugs Bee*

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vejiraziel October 6 2008, 23:34:02 UTC

I'm sorry this made you cry but I warned it was angst! T-T Glad you thought it beautiful. Thanks for reading!

nova_myth October 5 2008, 15:15:43 UTC

What is with all the death fics.. ;.; I know Halloween is coming but I don't want to be crying! They're just written so good...

vejiraziel October 6 2008, 23:38:07 UTC

I'm sorry, this one's not my fault, I swear!

snugsbunny October 5 2008, 19:41:30 UTC

Well I'll gladly take the blame and any fluffy punishment you wish to deal out XD

Ooh, and I love being part of the Angsttastic Duo, I feel as though I have accomplished something with my life XD

Very sad, and tissues used aplenty this end, and then I was reduced to using my sleeve.

This was beautiful, and I love the idea of cutting the chevron, and the oath, as they all translate it, was amazing, coupled with the bouquet, made this a wonderful piece to read and weep to sweets.

Though I'm glad they finally get to be together XD

Huggles babe

vejiraziel October 6 2008, 23:39:55 UTC

Yeah, you are the pair of angsty muses in everyone's lives it seems. XD *pats*

Yeaaah, the chevron part was my favorite, I felt that put in actions just how much Prowl loved Jazz and how devoted he was to him. The oath seemed fitting to have it translated by more than one mech. But yes, they're together at least.