Had to exorcise this one before I crash.

[vejiraziel]

Title: Doomsday Clock

Comments

[dark_daebereth]

-whimpers- Nooo, Prowl. And Jazz ;_; And THIS -> "Your reckless behavior is going to be your doom, Jazz." *hides under the blankets*

But the emotions in this were, god, right on the mark. Prowl ordering Jazz to leave, gah.

*scuttles back to read again, this time with tissues*

[vejiraziel]

I know, I warned this wasn't happy. And yeah, that line was a low blow because Prowl's 'joke' ended up being a prediction. Jazz's recklessness ended up being Prowl's doom and Jazz's own.

Oh yes, the scene where Prowl is ordering Jazz to leave was what nagged me into writing this in the first place. D: *hands tissues* Thanks for reading!

[__wilderness__]

Not happy with it? Veji... that is awesomely emotional!

Y halo thar buni.. go nibble at Veji's ankles

[vejiraziel]

The part after the battle had me all blah, it felt inadequate to me, but I'm glad you found it very emotional. XD Thank you for reading!

Oh no, don't you dare, woman! XD

[snugsbunny]

Oh, tissue warning needed on this one.

Gods, poor Jazz, he's going to have to live with this forever, well until...well we know what happens on Earth -need more tissues now-

I say give the bunny a carrot XD

I hope you continue this sometime in the future.

[vejiraziel]

Oh, believe me. Jazz lived with the guilt and the 'what ifs' until he decided to take it personal with Megatron.

I am not sure if I'll continue it any time soon. I kind of canned the bunny because I wasn't satisfied with the way I was uh... dealing with Prowl's fate. >>;; we'll see what happens eventually. D: Thanks for reading!

[okami_myrrhibis]

Well done... and *feeds carrots to the Prowlicade bunny*

If well written, it's always interesting to see how/why he switches, and if/when he returns. Would love to see your take.

[vejiraziel]

How he switches is not pretty in the slightest, I'm just gonna say it's Prowl's 'choice' to become Barricade in the end. I am not sure if I'll pick back on this bunny again any time soon, there's issues I have to deal with regarding the if/when he returns part.

Thanks for reading!

[vejiraziel]

More like trouble coming up with ideas to justify the changes to Barricade and the if/when he turns back to Prowl. We will see if I ever manage to get the plot going again. XD