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rainlightautumn September 23 2008, 14:39:04 UTC
Oh. Oh this was all kinds of wonderful!

Every single part of this was a joy to read. Jazz's secton was so painful, I was right there with him, even when he was walking around with Prowl I just ached for him. And poor Optimus, that made me giggle. ^^ And the end. Oh, the end.

Thanks so much for sharing. :D

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ex_naggingf September 23 2008, 14:58:48 UTC
Wow, what a great chapter! The part with Megatron embarrassing Optimus was hilarious.

You couldn't have made the segment with Jazz/Prowl more perfect. Well, if Prowl had stayed, maybe. I'm so happy they finally confessed their love for each other.

Thanks for such a wonderful story ♥

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mmouse15 September 23 2008, 20:27:19 UTC
I was feeling Jazz's pain, and then you segue into Optimus and Megatron and have me dying of laughter, and *yank* right back to the angst, only Prowl finally confesses!

About darn time, Prowl! And Jazz was awesome there. The two of them spending time together was so sweet and then they fell asleep together. That was the cherry on top. Whew! I look forward to seeing what happens while Prowl is gone and when he comes back. Of course, I look forward to more of everything in IC, this is just a part of the whole story-line. For example, whatever will Optimus decide?

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nekohitori September 26 2008, 20:51:51 UTC
Why do I get the feeling that Prowl and Jazz are going to start doing why my friend and her soldier boy are doing, with the "phone dates" and the cutesy-wootsy-semi-flirty messegages over facebook.

Shall we expect much teasing from whoever Prowl rooms/studies/works with?

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hakkyounotenshi October 30 2008, 16:02:57 UTC
oh wow.

I just happened to be rereading this and I realized something.

Is the Lullaby Box the one that Jazz's creator fixed for him when he was a sparkling?

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