Ok, this took the whole day, a photoshoot and many interruptions later, but here it is!

[vejiraziel]

Title: Un Ballade Pour Red Alert

Comments

[nortstar]

That was awsome
You storys are really great

[__wilderness__]

I think I melted several times during that...

Adorable... simply adorable!

Thank you!

[feeling_brave]

Love the sense of family that you've created here, both with Ratchet and Ironhide, and Jazz and Prowl. Can't help feeling sorry for lil'Jack though, can you imagine growing up with Inferno and the twins as siblings? Poor mech.

Did spot one tiny mistake, and I feel awful 'cause I know that I've made more than my fair share, but when Jazz and Prowl were taking Red for his check up, it says that "Red Alert wasn't bulging", personally I'm glad he wasn't but I don't think that was what you meant to say.

Anyway, back to the worship, the dialogue is great, the sparklings are adorable and the little bit of Jazz and Prowls history that you slipped in was, in my humble opinion, wonderful.

[mmouse15]

What a really nice little story, and just what I needed. It's been a tough week, and I wanted some fluffy reading - you obliged beautifully!

[okami_myrrhibis]

Ah... ok - Inferno was the one I couldn't quite place :)

Lovely!