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dragonofdispair September 17 2008, 01:16:58 UTC
poor prowl...

though as much as i loved the jazz/prowl being kinda clueless stuff, mirage was the one pulling my heartstrings this time. he needs more friends.

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:27:27 UTC
Mirage has friends, he's just been feeling too alienated from the world he knew because of the nobles who refuse to accept Hound. But things are going to look up for him!

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:35:58 UTC
I know, I know but you guys really don't think I was going to make it that easy for them, did you? Oh, yes. Bluestreak's unchecked lip was awesome and fun.

Sit tight, this ride's got a lot of twists and turns.

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nova_myth September 17 2008, 01:22:11 UTC
Oh, cool! I was wondering what twist you'd be tossing in!

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:48:36 UTC
Just tormenting poor Prowl and Jazz again.

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nova_myth September 17 2008, 02:25:45 UTC
Yes, but I'm really looking forward to Megatron too. We haven't seen much of him, and I'm really curious to see how he is in your story.

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:49:17 UTC
Of course the timming is horrible. XD It wouldn't be a twist otherwise! *goes to hide now*

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:53:52 UTC
But I don't wants death D:

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ex_naggingf September 17 2008, 01:35:30 UTC
Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Hound & Mirage -makes me want to draw them some more!!!

Noooooooo Prowl don't doooo it! (unless you can take Jazz with you as a military spouse!)

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vejiraziel September 17 2008, 01:47:13 UTC
Draw them, you know you want to~ *bricked!* Oh, I'm going to get lynched for the Prowl thing. XD;;

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