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okami_hu December 6 2007, 14:28:47 UTC
Eeeeee!! XD You're making me think all these inappropriate thoughts about my lovely Dinos... And everybody else just fits into the picture so well. ^^ Connections are hinted but not overexplained, and the piece gives us an insight to this Cybertron's social life. I'm pretty interested in that, too. It's a very good beginning. <3

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vejiraziel December 6 2007, 17:00:12 UTC
Ehhh! I wasn't expecting feedback/comments on this one. Makes me much happy that you liked it enough to offer feedback <3

And thank youu... yeaaah... think inappropiate thoughts about the Dinobots. e_e;;

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nova_myth December 6 2007, 16:59:54 UTC
I LOVE IT!!! XD I can't wait to see how Jazz and Prowl eventually end up as a couple. *.*

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vejiraziel December 6 2007, 17:01:27 UTC
Yay more comments. <3

Ohh-hohohohoh... Poor Jazz is going to have it rough with Prowl for a while, but all will be just fiiiiiiiine for those two~

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nova_myth December 6 2007, 17:43:50 UTC
"In the end, love is all that really matters" -no idea who

----brain fritz----

"I'm a little butterfly searching for my samurai"--DDR

Jazz= Butterfly Prowl=Samurai

::sees with Jazz with a huge partial kimono with beautiful wings and Prowl fitted out like a Samurai::

o.o

::looks at coffee::

I think I need another cup... or two... Halloween was two months ago...

::sees Jazz in a blue kimono with silver embroidery and white wings::

DAMN IT! Run away imagination, LOOK WHAT YOU STARTED!

XD

ROFL!

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lurkerlynne December 6 2007, 20:03:23 UTC
Methinks you've discovered the joy that is Irish Coffee. 'Tis wonderful stuff. ::sips coffee::

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lurkerlynne December 6 2007, 20:08:42 UTC
Ooh, you've written your AU! Yes! ::hugs:: I love a good AU.

Especially when it involves OP/SS and LapWarmer!Frenzy. Hee! :D Jazz is in for an uphill battle with Prowl, and so is Bluestreak. ::Settles in to wait for next fic::

BTW- how is Blaster kissing Soundwave? His mask retract or something?
BTW pt 2- there will be art to go along with this, yes? Please? ::gives kitty eyes::

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vejiraziel December 6 2007, 23:42:57 UTC
Well, Bluestreak's going to have it easier than Jazz, I can say that much. XD;

Soundwave's mask is retractable in this instance.
There will be some arts for this, yes.

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lurkerlynne December 7 2007, 00:37:40 UTC
Well, Bluestreak's going to have it easier than Jazz, I can say that much. XD

True, all Bluestreak has to do is make Narcissus notice him.

Soundwave's mask is retractable in this instance.

OP's too? SS needs to be kissed, well so does OP but that's beside the point.

There will be some arts for this, yes

Art! Huzzah! ::glomps::

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vejiraziel December 7 2007, 00:41:13 UTC
I don't know about Optimus' mask retracting for kissin' purposes. I always thought it'd be cute and kind of sad if Starscream kissed his mask instead for lack of 'lips' XD; But uh... we'll see what happens.

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tessombra August 13 2008, 14:19:01 UTC
I don't generally get so much into the 'human' interpretation of TF society--I find it hard to accept a machine society so intimately human (I know--the G1 series did it, its canon). The writing and characterization have to grab me. So this did. Very nicely written.

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