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dark_daebereth August 12 2008, 07:30:27 UTC
Inferno is such a sweetheart.
The way you weave backstory in is wonderful, it drifts in perfectly with the thoughts and doesn't jar at all. This is so very informative and still a lovely narrative chapter. <3

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vejiraziel August 12 2008, 07:35:26 UTC
Oh, he is. But I don't think Red Alert minds. XD

I have a tendency to throw background information while I write o_O;a dunno if that's for the better or for worse, though. XD Thanks for reading!

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kyra_neko_rei August 12 2008, 08:28:30 UTC
*purr purr purr purr purr purr purr purr*

That was wonderfully sweet.

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vejiraziel August 13 2008, 06:01:12 UTC
Thankies :D *petpet*

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__wilderness__ August 12 2008, 09:46:02 UTC
Guh... I am ded... the fluff is awesome! The whole scenes between Red Alert and Ratchet... and Inferno asking Ratchet's intentions... Just wonderful, simply wonderful

And I laugh because I am wearing my yellow scarf/sash today...

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vejiraziel August 13 2008, 06:01:58 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! :D I had this pairing in this au just for you~

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cmdrtekk August 12 2008, 13:27:55 UTC
Nice. Things appear to be working for these two finely.

And you slipped in the part about other family members as well, helping to link everything. It all relevant.

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vejiraziel August 13 2008, 06:03:38 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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vejiraziel August 13 2008, 06:04:17 UTC
:o Fluffy, poofy kitteh! *petpets*

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