Inferno is such a sweetheart. The way you weave backstory in is wonderful, it drifts in perfectly with the thoughts and doesn't jar at all. This is so very informative and still a lovely narrative chapter. <3
Guh... I am ded... the fluff is awesome! The whole scenes between Red Alert and Ratchet... and Inferno asking Ratchet's intentions... Just wonderful, simply wonderful
And I laugh because I am wearing my yellow scarf/sash today...
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The way you weave backstory in is wonderful, it drifts in perfectly with the thoughts and doesn't jar at all. This is so very informative and still a lovely narrative chapter. <3
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I have a tendency to throw background information while I write o_O;a dunno if that's for the better or for worse, though. XD Thanks for reading!
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That was wonderfully sweet.
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And I laugh because I am wearing my yellow scarf/sash today...
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And you slipped in the part about other family members as well, helping to link everything. It all relevant.
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