Fic: You Really Got Me, for talkingtothesky

Dec 29, 2013 11:56

Title: You Really Got Me
Author: little_cello
Recipient: talkingtothesky
Rating: White Cortina
Word Count: ~900
Prompt: Sam/Annie fluff, prompt word: database
Notes/Warnings: Fluffy fluffness. :D Those who have been chatting with me regularly will know that I've been ill since the 25th, and since I haven't had the time to write before, it was all I could think about - thus, ( Read more... )

exchange 2013, fanwork: fic

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rebelxxwaltz December 31 2013, 02:37:58 UTC
D'awwwwww how cute! :D

Sick fics are just too much fun-- they tend to bring out strengths and vulnerabilities in the sick person and the caregiver, but not always in the way we would expect! Annie seems able to put up with Sam's fretting simply because it's so transparent that he's only doing it because he cares, and obviously she would do the same for him... unless we look to 1x1 as our marker and she decides to punch him instead! <33333

I also loved how Gene managed to be a character in this fic just by being a bit shouty over the phone! I'm sure Sam is inclined to jump to Annie's defense whenever Gene makes a comment about her putting some lipstick on or not forgetting her handbag, whereas Annie probably senses that it's sort of Gene's way of including her in the team dynamic and doesn't mind at all. LOL!

The ending to this is so adorable, too! Makes me want to go build a blanket nest, although if I were Annie I would make sure Sam was offering something a bit better than just some 'extra tasty cake' for later! XDDDD

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little_cello January 3 2014, 14:53:48 UTC
Thank you so much, Rebel! <33333 So glad you enjoyed it! I wrote it just before the worst of my cold started (aka with a budding fever), so it kind of was the only thing that sprang to mind when I sat down to write this fic... XD I'm happy it worked so well. <3

Hahah yeah, you're absolutely right about how Annie puts up with Sam XD He simply means well!

Yeeesss exactly XD Annie gets it, Sam... doesn't. STILL doesn't. One day, Annie will have to enlighten him... X'D

Blanket/pillow nests are the best!! <33333 and HAHAH yeah X'DDDDD Sam is totally underestimating her stamina, isn't he. XD <33333 He just doesn't want her to overexert herself...!

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fern_tree January 1 2014, 23:11:09 UTC
THIS IS SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTEEEEE <333333333333333333333333333

Nyawwwwwwwwwwwww poor sick Annieeeee. But having Sam there all eager to please - not bad at all! ;D

And then Sam being ill at the end tooooooo <333333333333

It's lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy <333333333333333

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little_cello January 3 2014, 14:54:23 UTC
Ferrrnnnnn thank youuuuu!! <33333333333

Hah, indeed! Might be tempting to become ill more often in that case, eh XDD <333333333333

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talkingtothesky January 5 2014, 00:30:37 UTC
Cello, this is PERFECT. Thank you so so so sooo much. ♥ I particularly love the bit about him grimacing because of Gene's loud innuendos on the phone! And all the displays of affection between them. ♥ ♥ ♥

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little_cello January 5 2014, 18:20:37 UTC
Heeee I'm so glad you like it Sky!! <333333333333333333 *hugglessss*

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girlwtmousyhair January 7 2014, 23:50:49 UTC
Awww Cello, so sweet! That whole thing of Gene making no effort to lower his voice, and Sam needlessly trying to show that he disapproves - Annie and Gene have their own understanding, Sam, when will you learn?!

Bless, what a sweet couple Sam and Annie are x

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little_cello January 8 2014, 12:14:26 UTC
Thank yoouuuu! <333

Hahahah, I think Sam won't ever learn. XD But that's why Annie and we love him. <3

They so are, I love themmmmm! ♥ It's a delight to write them too!

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debl_ns January 12 2014, 22:10:27 UTC
Cello, you've given such a loving picture of Sam's feelings for Annie (his insistence on her resting on a mountain of pillows, for example), and vice versa as she voices her concern several times about his catching her cold. Such sweetness throughout. Lovely.

I want to mention this as well:

“No, hold on Sam - what's a database?”

Sam closed his mouth, looking somewhat surprised and also slightly panicked, Annie observed.

A brilliant observation by you!

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little_cello January 13 2014, 12:59:16 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwww thank you Debl! <333333333 I think these two simply are the sweetest couple ever, and I feel so fond when I think of them, so a lot of that went into writing this little ficlet. :')

Heeeee yeah, that moment where he realises "Oh shit I said something that doesn't belong in this time" XDDD

Thank you so very much! ♥

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