Fic: A Wish and a Command, for basaltgrrl

[severinne]

Title: A Wish and a Command

Comments

[talkingtothesky]

Yep, you've still got it! XD That fantastic gift for their snappy, sparky dialogue and all the sharp angry edges in their interactions which are hiding something else. I love that there's a tipping point whereafter they both just go for it, egging each other on, and the fact that said tipping point was effectively orchestrated by Sam makes me very happy indeed. :D

[severinne]

Aw, thank you! I don't write these two as often as I used to but after a bit of initial wrestling it does feel like slipping into a comfy pair of slippers sometimes. *pets her snarky men* And yes, I thought Sam was well due to take the bull by the horns this time out. :D

[bratflorida]

Oh goddd....this is incredibly hot! My favorite part:
‘I’d show you all right.’ Need coiled hot down Gene’s spine, making his thighs shake; his hands clawed futilely at the floor, desperate to touch. ‘I’d stroke, lick, suck every greedy inch of you…’ With a low moan, Sam pressed his face to Gene’s shoulder, breathing hot over his neck, so close… ‘Force you right to the edge… but I wouldn’t let you come, not yet.’
Slash is a new experience for me, but these two and this fic really do it for me! Love it!

[severinne]

Hey, welcome to the slash! *confetti* Glad you're enjoying what you're finding so far, Sam/Gene was the first slash pairing that got me into writing fic in the first place so their appeal as the gateway drug of slash is something I completely understand. *g*

Thanks for reading!

[debl_ns]

I love the description in this; it's so visual, and the biting sarcasm concealing their true feelings is so well done ... making it more than just "smut". :-)

[severinne]

I do find sarcasm and excessive description a big turn-on, so I'll still maintain the smut label for this one ;) Thank you!

[basaltgrrl]

Oh, it is such a BATTLE with them, always! And I think you capture that better than most, with the physicality and the emotion and what's said and unsaid and how much they both can read what's unsaid...

‘If you’re not interested, why am I still standing here with all my teeth intact?’ - Ooooh! Love it. Oh, Christmas morning is going to be AWESOME with them.

THank you SO MUCH, this is just what I wanted! Yay!

[severinne]

Oh, I'm so glad this is the sort of thing you had in mind! And sorry again that you had to wait on it, been one crisis after another lately... *headdesk*

Christmas morning is going to be AWESOME with them.

Funny you say that... I happen to be on the hook for the 24th of our Advent Calendar and a morning-after to this fic is about the only idea I've been able to conjure up... *is a lazy writer*

Thank you so much for a fun and easy prompt! Really enjoyed writing some Sam/Gene smut again :D

[_lethe_]

Great opening line! I must admit I thought that that was Sam thinking, not Gene, so nice twist.

Lovely last line as well, and great everything in-between!

He flashed those teeth, bright as heartache

Layers of clothing rasped and whispered

Gene could hear the smile in his voice as well as the endearing frowns.

Wonderful!

[severinne]

Glad you enjoyed a bit of reversal in this one - I like to give Sam and Gene equal opportunity to kick in doors, among other things. *g*

Thanks for reading!