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Fic: You'll Never Wear White at Your Wedding

Dec 08, 2008 22:38

Title: You'll Never Wear White at Your Wedding
Author: shotaphile
Recipient: lozenger8
Rating: Blueish Cortina. Not so tame subject material approached in a relatively safe manner. Er, I think.
Word Count: 1661
Notes/Warnings: Conversation about sex, Heinlein reference, virgin!Sam and me, trying my hand at a bit of snogging. Ugh. There's a reason I write mostly ( Read more... )

exchange 2008, fanwork: fic

Comments 13

lozenger8 December 9 2008, 07:25:31 UTC

Hahaha :D

Oh, this was a joy to read.

I love Gene's attitude and Sam's cluelessness.

But, Sam as a virgin? LOLOLOL.

The snogging was good. You should try your hand at writing it more often.

ETA: And thank you, of course. ♥

shotaphile December 9 2008, 17:13:08 UTC

:) It was a joy to write too, and I'm glad you liked it; Gene and Sam are so easy to write together.

But, Sam as a virgin? LOLOLOL.That's pretty much what my brain did when I first came up with the idea. But the strange thing is, it works, it really really does, because Sam is just stubborn and stupid enough to do it ( ... )

gritsinmisery December 9 2008, 13:30:02 UTC

Neck-porn, drunk!Sam... heh. Heh-heh-heh.

shotaphile December 9 2008, 17:14:15 UTC

Well with that neck, who can blame me for it, really?

:) Glad you enjoyed it.

jean_geanie December 9 2008, 16:03:01 UTC

Loved this! From Sam keying twiggy-man's car down to "Miss Mae".

Brilliant :)

shotaphile December 9 2008, 17:17:48 UTC

From Sam keying twiggy-man's car

He so would, you know he would. Sam can be a perfect little bitch when he wants to be.

And as for Miss Mae, In only really wrote it because I couldn't remember the other girl's name Gene had given Sam, and rather figured that Sam was due for a new one anyway. I was rather thinking Mae West when I wrote it, but I have no idea if she was even around in the seventies, so we'll just close our eyes and pretend, shall we?

dragonlit December 10 2008, 03:37:31 UTC

This was so cute and yummy with the picture of Sam's lovely neck and him wanting to save himself for marriage. Haven't read a lot along those lines. Haha! And I adored the comment about Sam being a vindictive little bitch. Very nicely done.

shotaphile December 10 2008, 07:15:42 UTC

Sam DOES have a lovely neck, doesn't he? *daydreams for a bit* ...

I think, in most fandoms, the idea of a virgin main character is so strange, that it hardly ever even gets contemplated any more. I've often seen such fic even labeled as crack. But the odd thing is, Sam WOULD SO TOTALLY DO IT.

Sam is like, the hive queen bitch. All other lesser bitches must bow down before him and pay homage.

candesgirl December 10 2008, 21:03:57 UTC

Ooh, this one was fun to read!! We need more Sam!neck smutlets....

And Sam, LOL, he really is SUCH a girl sometimes! Wonder if he'll wear a white tux...

shotaphile December 11 2008, 05:56:45 UTC

I love how every single person to comment thus far has in some way or another mentioned Sam's neck. It's like a nation staple or something. :D

I think he was mostly joking with Gene about marrying, but in that not really sort of way were he's just waiting for it to become legal before bringing it up again. And I think he'd want to wear white and then Gene would remind Sam of Joni and Sam would get all moody and sulk for DAYS.