[fic] your favourite drug ; onkey

[marshmallowtea]

your favourite drug ; onkey
a/n: totally churned this out in eleven minutes because i a)lost control of my life b)wanted some jongyu! open to feedback ♥
warnings: tebagging, forced orgasm, salophilia (sexual attraction to salt; especially body sweat), shades of BDSM, snowballing

Comments

[kiaroseuchiha]

can i be greedy? MORE!!!!!!!!! :)

[marshmallowtea]

That was a mistake on my part, actually. It started as Jongyu, but I literally changed it last minute and...well, forgot to change the tags. Fixed though, thanks for bringing it to my attention! :)

[named_lc]

It was hot as fuck, I was actually like idkfjdgcskd, but there is smth i cannot understand. Why jongyu? It's clearly Onkey.

Anyway, I really liked it. REALLY. Yeah.

[marshmallowtea]

It was a mistake on my part - I totally changed it last minute and...well, didn't change the tags. Thanks for saying something though so I can fix it :)

I'm glad you liked it!

[marshmallowtea]

First of all, thank you! :D That made my day knowing someone gets excited ;;;; but I am literally laughing at myself for forgetting to change the tags. every time I look I start laughing again :'D

I'm all for the more ~unconventional~ obsessions, and ... body sweat hadn't been used, so, I rolled with it.
As for the teabagging scene asdkmlskdfm thank you ;////////; it was my first one and I kept worrying "oh god is it believable"

Thanks for commenting ♥

[jinkibangs]

OH MY GOD
YOU DID IT
YOU ACTUALLY DID IT

Although I didn't know you were actually going to put the snowballing in this one so when it happened I was like
whoa Kibum whoa what are you doing

The rawness you use in your fics never ceases to amaze me, bro.

Hm... I wonder about the "hot factor in his book" line though... like of course it's a great line, but to me I see that more as the kind of language someone would use in one of the characters relating the event to someone else rather than in the narration itself. That's just my humble opinion though >>;

Can we just go back to Key licking down Jinki's back because shdgjaksd hgkja lshdjkafldhsa I love everything

[marshmallowtea]

WHY WOULDN'T I DO IT
I NEED TO SPREAD THE MESSAGE OF WHAT LORD SEUNGRI TELLS ME TO WRITE. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:・ﾟ✧

whoops, but I fixed the warning label :'D Sorry bout that, looks like I am full of derp lately.

....And come thinking, I don't...know if I can write anything but raw sex.

I can definitely see how it'd be used in relating an event, but I never thought about it that way. Thanks for pointing that out! I'll play with the line some more and either fix it in the next fic or fix it in this one if it's ~super~ intrusive/distracting.

yes
yes we can go back to that
Thanks for commenting ♥