[fic] casual satisfaction ; onjongkey

Apr 09, 2012 01:14

casual satisfaction; onew/jonghyun/key
a/n: wrote this when i was supposed to be working and or sleeping. unofficially the official sequel to blow your mind, but can be read as a standalone. beta'd by the lovely jinkibangs, who this was a present for.
warnings: threesome, double penetration

Jinki prays that his downstairs (and upstairs) dormmates are out or are heavy sleepers. )

type: smut, rating: nc-17, ot3: shinee (onew/jonghyun/key)

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marshmallowtea April 9 2012, 08:33:04 UTC
spot for jinkibangs, even though she's read this bahaha ♥

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jinkibangs April 10 2012, 00:12:05 UTC
girl I don't care how many times I read this I will always be squirming in my chair and wanting pancakes every time I reach the end.

teach me your raw and sensual speaking ways please.
I'ma start calling you sensual senpai okay
except not really because that's silly
but still how do you do this I want to know teach meeeeeeeee

;//////////; you write me the best presents.

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marshmallowtea April 10 2012, 06:19:23 UTC
pancakes? PANCAKES

ok here's what you do
one put on something nice
two don't be nervous
three gotta believe in Lord Seungri

:3 ♥ thank you for all the work you put into it too!!

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ridiculouso_o April 9 2012, 08:41:32 UTC
................................................................................
/dead

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marshmallowtea April 9 2012, 08:47:11 UTC
oh no please don't die ): do you need air, a phoenix down, or something ):

Thank you for reading :3 ♥

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ridiculouso_o April 9 2012, 16:50:37 UTC
I need lots of more continuations in this verse >:) hae;uorhaeograer

YOU'RE WELCOME AEHFAR IT WAS AN AWESOME READ ♥ ♥

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marshmallowtea April 9 2012, 18:16:10 UTC
kekekeke >:) There's a possibility, but I'm not sure how else I could flesh this out (I literally made a sequel from writing the Jonghyun drinking Kibum's orange juice part and telling him pulp sucks, LOL) into something else? I'll definitely consider it though.

HEARING THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY INSIDE ;A;

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owlus April 9 2012, 08:41:38 UTC
Oh. My. Fadoodle.

WHAT I JUST READ RIGHT NOW WAS JUST ABOUT ONE OF THE HOTTEST THINGS EVER. OH MY FADOODLE. This, okay this, I don't even know what to really say other than....wow I really don't know what to say. BUT JONGHYUN IS SO COCKY AND IT'S SO HOT LIKE REALLY EXTREMELY ATTRACTIVE AND THEN JONGHYUN DIRTY TALKING JINKI WHILE HE'S SUCKING JONGHYUN OFF RIGHT? AND HE'S TALKING ABOUT HIS SEXCAPDES WITH JINKI AND I CAN JUST PICTURE THAT OH MY FADOODLE

MY CAPS IS STUCK RN

OK
OK
OK
LEMME TRY TO UNSTICK IT there!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You've catered to my kinks, oh sweet dirty talking it is, this was just amazing? Terrific? Erotic? Pornorific? I don't know maybe all of them together but I sure know that I shall be reading this over and over and over and over ): I hope I'm not creeping you out this is just really hot, this fic was really attractive ;u;

I /really/ enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing!

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marshmallowtea April 9 2012, 08:46:25 UTC
I have this horrendous (wonderful?) habit of either writing Jonghyun as extremely cocky/definitely sure of himself or completely stoned out of his mindset. There is no balance with me; it's either one of those two.

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D ♥ also hahaha I am very happy I managed to cater to your kinks!

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subreadja April 9 2012, 16:58:45 UTC
ODG WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU POSTED THIS?! *creys*

This was wonderful. In that it was literally just sex, and that sort of thing is hot to my likings.

Jonghyun was such a smug turd. I loved it.

'Twas more exciting than a virgin edge on a rainbow sponge.

Write more smut, okay? Okay. I agree.

I tharang'd this.

Namaste.

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marshmallowtea April 9 2012, 18:13:29 UTC
I LITERALLY WENT TO SLEEP AFTERWARDS I'M SO SORRY

oh my gosh! look at all those WIGGLES.

I more than likely will keep writing smut, even if comes and goes in random ~inspiration~ waves.

Thanks for reading! ♥

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childishgrin April 10 2012, 05:34:06 UTC
Well fuck. That was some hot stuff, I'm glad you made this "sequel" happen.

"Fuck, again, please Jinki, please. Jesus christ please? Do you want me to suck you off? Remember -oh fuck christ that feels so good, grind against me just like that-how beautiful my lips looked around you, all shiny and swollen and slick?" Kibum’s babbling now but he doesn’t care; too caught up in pleasure to notice his mouth running.

Yeah ok, I want that as a fic too because it's just evil to tease us like that and because I love OnKey.

... And maybe another one with Jongyu being Onhyun instead. :D

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marshmallowtea April 10 2012, 06:18:30 UTC
It started because I wanted to write Jonghyun bitching about pulp in his orange juice. From there, it somehow became...this...
I'm not going to question the Yes. The Yes helped me with this piece.

kekekekekekeke I will have to see what inspiration pops up! At the very least, I might make a drabble off that.

Thank you for reading :D I'm glad you enjoyed it~

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