Comments | marshmallowtea: [fic] closed doors ; jongkey & minho/key

marshmallowtea

[fic] closed doors ; jongkey & minho/key

Aug 10, 2011 03:54

closed doors ; jonghyun/key and minho/key
a/n: sup? been working on this for a while, finally finished it. also, snack sized baggies are this size, just incase you've never seen them lol.
warnings: non-con and mild mutilation (burning with a cigarette). and ofc mental trauma and drugs

( there's a horrid feeling of bugs crawling under his skin )

type: smut, pairing: jonghyun/key, type: angst, group: shinee, rating: nc-17, pairing: minho/key

Comments 18

makesmeangry August 10 2011, 15:03:05 UTC

NO WORDS

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marshmallowtea August 14 2011, 03:20:05 UTC

SORRY I WAS YESING TOO HARD

xxlexandrosxx August 30 2011, 17:40:51 UTC

Jonghyun..

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marshmallowtea August 31 2011, 07:15:33 UTC

THAT GIF
LMFAO I AM DYING
IS THAT BRIAN JOO

it's really able to go either way, which is kinda the "beauty" (as twisted as this is) of the fic. some may say minho is a monster for what he did, and some may point fingers at jonghyun for just kinda...lapsing.

xxlexandrosxx August 31 2011, 10:08:29 UTC

Yes it's him! On Strong Heart. :D
Isn't he precious. xD

And I agree, this story is kinda psychological (well not kinda, it is xD). I like things like that, you did a good job. :)

kinkibum August 31 2011, 06:56:55 UTC

oh my god
"Hyung," is all Kibum manages to get out before dissolving into quiet sobs. Jonghyun's silent for a good few moments, an exhale slowly being let out before hanging up.

The click in the empty room buries itself into Kibum's soul.

these last lines... i cried. because key still had hope in him. even i was hoping that he'd come pick key up or something. it was too cruel.
but that is what made it a good fic ;__;

marshmallowtea August 31 2011, 07:02:12 UTC

thank you ;______; and yeah, key really did have so much hope in him.

i thought about doing a prequel, but realized this can stand perfect alone.

kinkibum August 31 2011, 07:39:31 UTC

but... if you did a prequel i'd be /very/ happy. please? :3

or even continue this... i think a background to their relationship could be fleshed out that way. with the way key cried out for jonghyun when he picked up the phone, i don't think key would leave him.

marshmallowtea August 31 2011, 18:03:26 UTC

i am kind of leaning very heavily towards a sequel or a spin-off of it...give me some more thought :3 if i don't, i might make another fic with a similar plotline or something along the lines.

thank you for the idea/spark of continuing!

mrsclaychoi September 4 2011, 07:23:59 UTC

WHAT THE HELL!!!
not only is jongie a damn addict..he so fucked up that he sales key?????and key gets burned AND RAPED???
normally i dont mind rape (yes,im twisted apparently) but this one...for the first time struck me the wrong way..
but at the same time,i want a sequel..Just to know what happens between jonghyun and key..
Don't get me wrong..i still like the story..just shocked

marshmallowtea September 6 2011, 05:16:12 UTC

rape is a really touchy subject for me to write, so i'm kinda judging myself for writing this tbh :||||

you're the second to wish for a sequel! i kind of want to try one, but i might have to play around with the idea/method of approaching it.