Comments | marshal_science: 'rain' (1/1) by jp5412

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'rain' (1/1) by jp5412

Sep 12, 2009 16:05

TITLE: rain
AUTHOR: jp5412
PAIRING: J/N preslash
RATING: PG-13
CATEGORY: character death, dark, h/c, angst
SUMMARY:
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genre: dark, genre: challenge, fanfic, genre: hurt/comfort, author: jp5412, genre: angst, character: nathan, pairing: jack/nathan, fic exchange 2009, character: jack, rating: pg-13, genre: character death

Comments 9

natwestgirl September 12 2009, 21:41:41 UTC

wow, I never like ally away. But you place her character in a new light. Is she the real reason Nathan and Jack never got together. Allison always there.. Mmm
Great job. You can do wonders with the story line and make it into a longer story.

ausgezeichnet September 12 2009, 22:40:18 UTC

That was great, I love the way you twisted it at the end.

indigocat September 13 2009, 00:03:30 UTC

Oh, my gosh. I was not expecting the ending. I agree with a previous post. This story line needs to be expanded.

kmoaton September 13 2009, 02:06:43 UTC

The ending was so totally unexpected! I love that dark side of Nathan. I agree with previous posts, this begs to be expanded, even with a prequel to show how everyone arrived at this point!

clarkoholic September 29 2009, 04:27:31 UTC

Oh snap! Bad Nathan, Bad!!

Oh thank you for this! I totally don't deserve it, as I never finished my story for the exchange, but thank you so much! It was so dark and moody. Exactly what I love!