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marsarmygurl

FIC: Off The Hook - Part One

Apr 29, 2009 15:03

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synacky, zacky vengeance, prompt table, songfic, fanfiction, 30 seconds to mars, off the hook, synyster gates, jared leto, trust, slash, avenged sevenfold

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ninjafrog30 April 29 2009, 20:24:41 UTC

ohh. my. johnny. fukkingg. christopherr!!
HOW DO YOU FUCKING WRITE SUCH AWESOME SMUT?!?!?!?!
that was INCREDIBLE!!!!
holy god!!
sweet baby jesus!!
that was fukkin' HAWT!!
Brian moaning in his sleep was...GUUHHH!!! SO hott!! I LOVED IT!!
so, continue!!
duh!!
that was delicious!!
i was like trying to keep my face from falling open (haha! i actually mean my mouth, but that sounded more awesomer! lol!) but it was SO good, i couldnt keep from smiling thru part of it!!
your an amazingg writer!!
im serious!!
that was awesome!!
okay, im gonna stop, but that was just...GAAAHHHH!!!!
TOO GOOD FOR WORDS!! XD!!!!!!

marsarmygurl April 29 2009, 20:55:45 UTC

(blushes) awww... Thanks... I'm pretty sure this is the smuttiest thing I've actually posted yet. I always post with the INTENTION of pure smut, but I always get caught up in silly things like character development and plot lines (stupid, I know hehe) but this was fun. And it's funny that it was so easy for me to do synacky smut. lol. It's not my first pairing choice for Brian, but I thought it fit well for the story. Thanks so much for the encouragment. I am totally continuing it.. don't worry!
BTW- Notice any errors or anything that needed changing? Did it all make sense?

ninjafrog30 April 29 2009, 21:48:16 UTC

yea it fukkin' made sense!! it made ALOT of sense!! it was HOTT!! :)!!
and, i noticed a couple of typos, and maybe like two misspelled words-but nothing to really worry about.
it was awesome!! you give your self a pat on the back now!! lol!! XD!!!!!!