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sleeper6 November 7 2012, 22:56:17 UTC
Hmm, I like the idea of Reid having a cousin like Allen. I mean, he's a jerk (Allen) but I can see how this could be a viable reason for why Reid avoids his only relatives. Just like Luke to stand up for Reid! Great plot point.

Though maybe they're rushing things a bit, I can't help but want them to just get naked and do it already! Hee.

The idea of them in jail is too funny. Yup, if anyone could get them into that much trouble, it'd be Reid's mouth. Ha ha.

Really enjoy this fic!

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marsabi November 8 2012, 12:54:34 UTC
Lol! This is a story where I hold them off for the longest time (you know, I usually jump right into some hot scene), but hopefully, that will make the reward all the sweeter.

I'm thrilled you liked Allen. I'm always imagining Reid's past, and I felt like there were so many fics with Angus...I wanted to explore something else.

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sajaal November 8 2012, 00:16:11 UTC
OMG...what's with all of the c**kblocking, and I thought my stories were bad for that. Allen what a self-righteous a-hole all I can say is OOOOOOHHHHH I want to hurt him...okay feeling a bit calmer. Once again a fantastic chapter.. I loved this line,

No mother bashing.”

“No bashing. I’m just stating the facts. But fine. I’ll leave Lily alone. How about all of the times the rest of your family bothered me at work? Not to mention, one of them is always getting shot or kidnapped or otherwise injured. I’ve provided so much free medical care to all the Snyders in town-it’s like they’ve won the lottery.”

So perfect for these two and Luke finally letting the feelings come out and wanting to be with Reid...but now the crazy driving and of course Reid would get them thrown in jail:))

Well done!!!

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marsabi November 8 2012, 12:52:18 UTC
Lol! Usually, I am not much for c-blocking! But here, I wanted to milk the angst and the later reward...

I'm always so interested in the parts you mention and your inisights--thanks!!

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tldreamer November 14 2012, 00:06:07 UTC
Love how you are piling it on.

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marsabi November 14 2012, 03:12:17 UTC
Lol! Thanks! I had to look at what chapter you were in to see what I was "piling"!

Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!

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