Lure BB: The Road Home: Chapters One and Two

[marsabi]

Comments

[sajaal]

I'm so very happy that you have written this and I'm sooooo intrigued at what caused the split but I will have to wait and try and read a few chapters a day. I must say I'm happy that you decided that Simon should be with Katie and Maddie with Casey...reminds me of another story LOL And how did you know I drive a Honda...I swear you read my mind:))

Thank you for this, I know how busy your RL is, I'll read more very soon promise!!!

[marsabi]

Glad you like all that! LOl! I always liked those pairings. I'll be looking forward to your comments on the rest.

[smoothlikebutta]

What a wonderful start. It is obvious how much Luke and Reid love each other, so I am intrigued about why they are apart. I love the idea of them going on a road trip together. I am sure interesting adventures lay ahead.

[marsabi]

Thanks! I hope you enjoy it.

I wanted a story where they had to find the way back to each other, but as you said, they also clearly wanted to be back together and still loved each other. In that sense, I did not want a true breakup fic.

[sleeper6]

Marsabi, you did it! I actually read this since Monday but I was on a business trip and didn't want to comment on my tiny phone screen so I've waited til now to tell you how much I enjoyed this. This chapter is such a great start; though they've been apart for so long, I like how they just come together here to embark on the road trip.

[marsabi]

Thanks so much! I get really excited to see such specific comments.

I like maniupulative Luke too, lol, because he always does it with such heart!

[tldreamer]

Loving this so far. I'm very interested to read what exactly happened months ago and why Luke is fingering his chip. Something big must've blown up.

[marsabi]

Thanks so much!

Yeah, it is pretty sad and traumatic