Without Borders 14

[marsabi]

Title: Without Borders 14/14

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[suzvoy]

What a beautifully written, wonderful story! Thank you so, so much!

[marsabi]

Thanks!!

[cherimola]

Finally back from my trip to your fair state -- too bad I couldn't make it to that swamp! I do love me some nature. :)

and he was looking down at some ducks swimming in the green algae of the swamp.
And I love this detail.

The wooden walkway stretched out for over 3 miles.
Dude!

“Yeah, I think a group of early bird diners just power walked past me,”
Ha!

“Here’s the thing,”
This whole speech -- just the right tone.

”Are we done with this apology stuff? All better?”
Sighh, I so freaking love your Reid.

“Did that bonehead really not sleep with you for two years?”
Exhibit B.

Reid looked up, “Blue Heron,” he said, impressed by the bird.
I'd say someone's a secret nature lover. ;)

When it really mattered, Reid would wait.
Perfect.

Luke licked his lips and paused, gathering his words slowly.
Perfecter.

“Here.” Reid thrust something quickly at him. “Just don’t tell anybody I was encouraging you with this.” He looked around.
N'awww!

“Besides, our story should get equal time, after all.”
Darn skippy!

“Reid!” He smacked at him. “

[marsabi]

Thanks, friend of mine! Happy dance! So glad you liked the last part! I loved seeing what lines stood out for you too!

[weqimiri]

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[marsabi]

Hey there,
I'm not sure what you are asking me? The number of what?
Can you tell me again and I'll try and help you?