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murgy31 December 31 2010, 06:44:58 UTC
OMG!!!!! Can I just tell you that ADORE Natalie! She is so awesome. Poor Reid, she played him like a fiddle....

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marsabi December 31 2010, 13:14:23 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, I think Natalie may be most like Luke , but have picked up a few Reid qualities too lOL

Reid needed that wack on the head to see the situation

Thnaks so much for the comment! Happy New Year!

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lurefanatic December 31 2010, 07:42:39 UTC
Oh poor Reid. Nat's plan was cute and Luke's family funny. Love Luke and Reid together and this story.

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marsabi December 31 2010, 13:13:12 UTC
Thanks! I wanted to reverse the scene where Luke turns to his family for help and have it be Reid's turn (although he does not want it). Nat is still working on Reid LOL
Thanks for the comment

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ladynomad915 December 31 2010, 18:16:36 UTC
This chapter was really good.

loved Natalie's plan and the steps.

Lol poor Reid ambused by the woman in Luke's family.

Poor Reid jr being "tortured" by Ehtan

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marsabi December 31 2010, 18:23:24 UTC
Thanks! I hope to get more posted soon. Happy New Year!

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drunkyluke March 3 2011, 17:31:36 UTC
poor reid. he never stood a chance. that natalie is brilliant! what a great idea! lily tossing noah into the ring. expertly played. well reid the balls in your court. don't screw it up!!

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