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Hit and Run - Part 5

Dec 07, 2010 13:33

Title: Hit and Run ( Read more... )

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ladynomad915 December 8 2010, 06:50:17 UTC

damn I have 3 suspects in this now of who ran over Natalie.

We can do it right there. But don’t think it will be anything more than sex,” Reid added cruelly. “It won’t mean anything.”//dang the was evil of reid to say that ot Luke.

You did a great job describing Carly drunk I could picture it so well.

can't wait for the next chapter where Reid takes care of Luke.

marsabi December 8 2010, 12:46:04 UTC

Thanks! It is hard for me to have Reid be so mean, but we all know Reid when he is hurt...Drunk Carly is more fun to imagine than sober Carly

Thanks for the comment

ladynomad915 December 8 2010, 16:18:12 UTC

Drunk Carly is more fun to imagine than sober Carly//lol

rtruffles December 8 2010, 07:58:32 UTC

I loved this!!

You did a fantastic job with Chris. I hate him here too!!

I loved that Reid is the one who is going to fix Luke!

Great chapter!

marsabi December 8 2010, 12:44:26 UTC

Wasn't it you who also wrote that torture thing with Reid's ghost and Chris? That was great and I thought now here is a person who hates him too! I enjoyed trashing Noah for Noah Who, but it is Chris that really makes me truly upset...I killed him in one of my stories, but my bitterness lives on...LOL

That is why I loved your last chapter with Chris too. I see him like you do...I don't know if I will ever write a fic where he is a nice guy...

rtruffles December 8 2010, 22:19:31 UTC

Yes I wrote that one, I'm glad that you liked it.
I agree with you about Noah too. He's an idiot and he treated Luke horribly and so I make him suffer for that, but it is Chris who really upsets me.
I still can't believe that they killed Reid to save awful Chris Hughes. To me he was just completely unlikeable. I never bought the love story between Chris and Katie. Bleh!!!

I'm still bitter!!!

Sorry for the rant!

drunkyluke March 3 2011, 14:52:31 UTC

oh carly..... no, i'm not even going to entertain that thought. carly DID NOT hit natalie.
what's up with bob? chris is an ass. casey is such a good friend. noah dancing shirtless, LOL!!! like the way reid give luke the postcards. made me laugh. luke all rambo like. now, this will give reid and luke the chance to talk it out. chris, stay away from carly. great chapter.

drunkyluke March 3 2011, 14:55:27 UTC

me again. loved the way luke decorated natalie's room. he's such a good brother!